Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative asrts such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1
Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative asrts such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded alternative sources. v. 1
There is no doubt that in every country there are many creative artists but they do not have financial support to play such as feathers, films but others believe that the Government should help with financial support. In my opinion, the roof of this problem Government gives more attention to sportsmen than artists also government should provide artists too.
We can see that many creative artists can not show their talents in old buildings. It means that Government should give more attention to creative artists with great talent. For example, in Tashkent there are many brilliant musicians and painters unfortunately they work in school, but Government gives financial backing to sport activity such as football, boxing as result economy of the country lose much capital, Meanwhile many creative artists may bring much money economy of the country. For example, Every year in Italy holds musician show all of the countries perform their talents and compete also many big companies investigate much money to this program if one artists had won they would give big gifts such as diploma, much payment and, car. In addition, they become very popular.
Furthermore, I think, the solution of this problem, the Government should build more music school as at present many teenagers have talents also built many opera houses, theatre, main hall where society may visit also get relaxed. Meanwhile, Tv programs should more show theatre and opera.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.
There is no doubt that in every
country
there are
many
creative
artists
but
they do not have
financial
support to play such as feathers, films
but
others believe that the
Government
should
help
with
financial
support. In my opinion, the roof of this problem
Government
gives
more attention to sportsmen than
artists
also
government
should provide
artists
too.
We can
see
that
many
creative
artists
can not
show
their
talents
in
old
buildings. It means that
Government
should
give
more attention to
creative
artists
with great
talent
.
For example
, in Tashkent there are
many
brilliant musicians and painters unfortunately they work in school,
but
Government
gives
financial
backing to sport activity such as football, boxing as result economy of the
country
lose
much
capital, Meanwhile
many
creative
artists
may bring
much
money economy of the
country
.
For example
, Every year in Italy holds musician
show
all of the
countries
perform their
talents
and compete
also
many
big
companies
investigate
much
money to this program if one
artists
had won they would
give
big
gifts such as diploma,
much
payment and, car.
In addition
, they become
very
popular.
Furthermore
, I
think
, the solution of this problem, the
Government
should build more music school as at present
many
teenagers
have
talents
also
built
many
opera
houses
,
theatre
, main hall where society may visit
also
get
relaxed. Meanwhile,
Tv
programs should more
show
theatre
and opera.
In conclusion
, there are
good
reasons why
artists
should rely on alternative sources of
financial
support,
but
in my opinion
government
help
is
sometimes
necessary.
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