Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion v.5
Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. 5
It is clear that extreme sports are dangerous, so some people think the government should prohibit it. While Others argue that people have the right to do any kind of sports that they want. In my opinion, I believe people should have freedom to participate in any activities.
There are some reasons why government should ban dangerous sports. First, since Extreme sports will leave a long lasting injuries on people physical health. Bones broken, for example, it will make people hard to move or do heavy jobs in the future, so the quality of life will reduce day by day. Moreover, Dangerous sports can cause mental illness. The most dangerous example is plant-life. People will be paralysed since their brain is damaged by collapsing while playing. This disease is likely to cause permanent affected, and the percentage of recovery is very low. Thus, government should consider about banning this kind of sport.
Although extreme sports some time can be fatal, I still believe that players always are protected by producers and take many beneficial from extreme sports. First, nowadays, Companies who provide dangerous sports are more and more strictly about the procedures and protect equipments. For instance, jumping from a plane, players must have one professional coach to jump with them, and reject the person who under 18 to play. In addition, extreme sports can help players release stress effectively, so they can improve the productivity and creativity in the workplace.
In conclusion, I believe with the development of equipment and severe disciplines nowadays, people are free to play dangerous sports without worrying about its' negative sides.
It is
clear
that
extreme
sports
are
dangerous
,
so
some
people
think
the
government
should prohibit it.
While
Others argue that
people
have the right to do any kind of
sports
that they want. In my opinion, I believe
people
should have freedom to participate in any activities.
There are
some
reasons why
government
should ban
dangerous
sports
.
First
, since
Extreme
sports
will
leave
a
long lasting
injuries
on
people
physical health. Bones broken,
for example
, it will
make
people
hard
to
move
or do heavy jobs in the future,
so
the quality of life will
reduce
day by day.
Moreover
,
Dangerous
sports
can cause mental illness. The most
dangerous
example is plant-life.
People
will be
paralysed
since their brain
is damaged
by collapsing while playing. This disease is likely to cause permanent
affected
, and the percentage of recovery is
very
low.
Thus
,
government
should
consider about banning
this kind of sport.
Although
extreme
sports
some
time can be fatal, I
still
believe that players always
are protected
by producers and take
many
beneficial from
extreme
sports
.
First
, nowadays,
Companies
who provide
dangerous
sports
are more and more
strictly
about the procedures and protect equipments.
For instance
, jumping from a
plane
, players
must
have one professional coach to jump with them, and reject the person who under 18 to play.
In addition
,
extreme
sports
can
help
players release
stress
effectively
,
so
they can
improve
the productivity and creativity in the workplace.
In conclusion
, I believe with the development of equipment and severe disciplines nowadays,
people
are free to play
dangerous
sports
without worrying about
its'
negative
sides.
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