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Some people think that governments must insist on preserving traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement v.1

Some people think that governments must insist on preserving traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment. with the statement v. 1
Preserving historic buildings is vital to understanding our nation’s heritage. In the process of restoring them, some people believe that the authorities should not compensate for any changes made in their original appearance, and that the buildings should be restored as they were. This essay shall advocate a practical approach to this scenario. Restoration is said as the process of accurately depicting the form, features, and character of a property as it appeared at a particular period of time by reconstruction of missing features from the restoration period. All around the world, there are many active redevelopment projects undertaken by the government to preserve the sanctity of these ancient treasures. However, it is not reasonably possible to restore each and every detail of these buildings as it was. Primarily, the construction of these centuries-old buildings begin to wear in time. In such cases, some parts of the buildings might not be in a recoverable condition. Here, the architects need to reconstruct that particular part to give a complete look to the puzzle of these primeval structures. Therefore, it is unaccommodating for the government to demand accurate traditional appearance of the buildings. Sometimes, a few relevant contemporary touches need to be added to make the older buildings appeasing enough. In closing, we can safely say the government should not be insisted on minute preservation of traditional appearance of older buildings. Minor modifications can definitely be made to adapt existing buildings to compatible new uses. This not only makes good economic sense, but preserves our legacy also.
Preserving historic
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buildings
is vital to understanding our nation’s heritage. In the process of restoring them,
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some
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people
believe that the authorities should not compensate for any
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changes
made in their original appearance, and that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
should
be restored
as they were. This essay shall advocate a practical approach to this scenario.

Restoration
is said
as the process of
accurately
depicting the form, features, and character of a property as it appeared at a particular period of time by reconstruction of missing features from the restoration period. All around the world, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
active redevelopment projects undertaken by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to preserve the sanctity of these ancient treasures.
However
, it is not
reasonably
possible to restore each and every detail of these
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buildings
as it was.

Primarily
, the construction of these centuries-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
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buildings
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
to wear in time. In such cases,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
parts of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
might not be in a recoverable condition. Here, the architects need to reconstruct that particular part to give a complete look to the puzzle of these primeval structures.
Therefore
, it is unaccommodating for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to demand accurate traditional appearance of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
, a few relevant contemporary touches need to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to
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make
the older
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buildings
appeasing
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enough
.

In closing, we can
safely
say the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should not
be insisted
on minute preservation of traditional appearance of older
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
. Minor modifications can definitely
be made
to adapt existing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
to compatible new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
. This not
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only
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makes
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good
economic sense,
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but
preserves our legacy
also
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that governments must insist on preserving traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment. with the statement v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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