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Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. v. 1
People believe's that, we need to select the friends based on the same thinking as we do. Others believe that it should be quite opposite. Well, I completely disagree with the aforementioned statement. This essay will discuss both types of public opinions irrespective of their nature of thinking capabilities. On the one hand, there are more possibilities to get the conflicts between the friends if we choose different opinions as they have. The predominant advantages of having different odd thinking skills friends is, wide range of thinking of a global space since people do have a variety of thoughts in their mind and ultimately, people will get greater benefit of expressing their views in order to combat their opponent member. Secondly, the maturity levels will boost their upcoming career with a vast amount of knowledge they have and winning spirit in their level drastically increased with their age. On the other hand, by having identical opinions of friends there were less likely get the conflicts between them. Since the people having the same thoughts within the limited knowledge they never grown-up. Their analytical skills in terms of their personal as well as their upcoming career. In the recent study, conducted by Global Personal Bonding Group published that, these people are more like introvert and they do have problems with effective communication to express their views of the World. However, people believe that, as long as they do not have nay issues to continue their friendship it's better to choose that tantamount friends. To conclude, It really does not matter whether the selected friends are really having almost equal opinions or completely different thinking skills. In order to continue their lifetime friendship requires merely their understanding capabilities based on the situations and their positive attitude irrespective of people are well-educated or destitute.
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believe's
that, we need to select the
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friends
based on the same
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thinking
as we do. Others believe that it should be quite opposite. Well, I completely disagree with the aforementioned statement. This essay will discuss both types of public
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opinions
irrespective of their nature of
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thinking
capabilities.

On the one hand, there are more possibilities to
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get
the conflicts between the
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friends
if we choose
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different
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opinions
as they have. The predominant advantages of
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having
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different
odd
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thinking
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skills
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friends
is, wide range of
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thinking
of a global space since
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people
do have a variety of thoughts in their mind and
ultimately
,
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people
will
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get
greater benefit of expressing their views in order to combat their opponent member.
Secondly
, the maturity levels will boost their upcoming career with a vast amount of knowledge they have and winning spirit in their level
drastically
increased with their age.

On the other hand
, by
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having
identical
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opinions
of
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friends
there were less likely
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get
the conflicts between them.
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Since
the
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people
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having
the same thoughts within the limited knowledge they never grown-up. Their analytical
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skills
in terms of their personal
as well
as their upcoming career. In the recent study, conducted by Global Personal Bonding Group published that, these
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people
are more like
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introvert and
they do have problems with effective communication to express their views of the World.
However
,
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people
believe that, as long as they do not have nay issues to continue their friendship it's better to choose that tantamount friends.

To conclude
, It
really
does not matter whether the selected
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friends
are
really
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having
almost equal
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opinions
or completely
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different
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thinking
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skills
. In order to continue their lifetime friendship requires
merely
their understanding capabilities based on the situations and their
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positive
attitude irrespective of
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people
are well-educated or destitute.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that genetically modified crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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Task Achievement: 7.5
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