Some people believe that formal study is necessary for children at younger ages while others have an opposite view that it should not initiate until 7 years old. It is obvious that new generation becoming more and more smarter than the past and their ability to get new information and educate new subject increase dramatically. I think an early commencement of study would be more beneficial and vital than a later start.
On the one hand, some people hold the view that young children should start learning formal education as soon as possible in order to some reason. Firstly due to the fact that new generations have been growing in modern and technological circumstance in compare of past decades their brain are sharp and more active. For instance, there are many gadgets and media's that technology brings children to their house so kids have a chance to see and experience and learn basic knowledge from their birth so They can prepare for school at younger ages. Secondly starting school early has a positive and significant impact on their profession and educational future.
On the other hands, other hold the opinion that sending children to school before age 7 may have negative effects on their mind. If kids and toddlers begin that sooner, they will lose their interest in studies and get bored and tired. In other words, they believe children need playing and recreation at that time of their life to rise their creativity. Furthermore there is an opportunity for children to spend their time with family and learn Some more vital subject like love and care.
To conclude, although, views differ about starting formal education before the age of 7. I believe that it's appropriate and beneficial for children to initiate school at younger ages because of their intelligence and today development.
Some
people
believe that formal study is necessary for
children
at younger
ages
while others have an opposite view that it should not initiate until 7 years
old
. It is obvious that
new
generation becoming more and
more smarter
than the past and their ability to
get
new
information and educate
new
subject increase
dramatically
. I
think
an early commencement of study would be more beneficial and vital than a later
start
.
On the one hand,
some
people
hold the view that young
children
should
start
learning formal education as
soon
as possible in order to
some
reason.
Firstly
due to the fact that
new
generations have been growing in modern and technological circumstance in compare of past decades their brain are sharp and more active.
For instance
, there are
many
gadgets and media's that technology brings
children
to their
house
so
kids have a chance to
see
and experience and learn basic knowledge from their birth
so
They can prepare for
school
at younger
ages
.
Secondly
starting
school
early has a
positive
and significant impact on their profession and educational future.
On the
other
hands,
other
hold the opinion that sending
children
to
school
before
age
7 may have
negative
effects on their mind. If kids and toddlers
begin
that sooner, they will lose their interest in studies and
get
bored and tired. In
other
words, they believe
children
need playing and recreation at that time of their life to rise their creativity.
Furthermore
there is an opportunity for
children
to spend their time with family and learn
Some
more vital subject like
love
and care.
To conclude
, although, views differ about starting formal education
before
the
age
of 7. I believe that it's appropriate and beneficial for
children
to initiate
school
at younger
ages
because
of their intelligence and
today
development.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes