Many people believe that judicial discipline should not be practiced while others feel that this form of judgement should continue. I am of the opinion that capital punishment should remain as some crimes committed are too vile and should not be let off lightly. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of having a death sentence.
The downside of having capital punishment would be that criminals would not be able to atone for their wrongdoings. Sometimes, violent acts of crime could have been committed in the heat of the moment or in self-defence, and sentencing someone to the gallows denies the person of the opportunity to turn over a new leaf and start afresh. In addition, citizens should be motivated to behave well not based on fear, but with grace and kindness.
On the other hand, having the capital sanction in place sends a strict warning to deter everyone from committing heinous acts. If society were to punish its criminals lightly, it would be sending a message to its citizens that they can get away with committing crime. This would be wrong and would create an unsafe environment for all, as people might do bad things to one another knowing that the consequences are light. Furthermore, some cases are so horrific that only execution is justified.
In conclusion, legal punishment by death should remain and should not be removed in order to stop people from acting on violent crimes. Although it could be argued that this could repudiate someone of the opportunity to change, but such cases rarely happen. Therefore, the death row should remain to ensure order and stability in our society. 
 Many
  people
 believe that judicial discipline should not  
be practiced
 while others feel that this form of judgement should continue. I am of the opinion that capital punishment should remain as  
some
  crimes
 committed are too vile and should not be  
let
 off  
lightly
. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of having a death sentence.
The downside of having capital punishment would be that criminals would not be able to atone for their wrongdoings.  
Sometimes
, violent acts of  
crime
 could have  
been committed
 in the heat of the moment or in  
self-defence
, and sentencing someone to the gallows denies the person of the opportunity to turn over a new leaf and  
start
 afresh.  
In addition
, citizens should  
be motivated
 to behave well not based on fear,  
but
 with grace and kindness. 
On the other hand
, having the capital sanction in place  
sends
 a strict warning to deter everyone from committing heinous acts. If society were to punish its criminals  
lightly
, it would be sending a message to its citizens that they can  
get
 away with committing  
crime
. This would be  
wrong
 and would create an unsafe environment for all, as  
people
 might do  
bad
 things to one another knowing that the consequences are light.  
Furthermore
,  
some
 cases are  
so
 horrific that  
only
 execution  
is justified
. 
In conclusion
, legal punishment by death should remain and should not  
be removed
 in order to  
stop
  people
 from acting on violent  
crimes
. Although it could  
be argued
 that this could repudiate someone of the opportunity to  
change
,  
but
 such cases rarely happen.  
Therefore
, the death row should remain to ensure order and stability in our society. 
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