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Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? v. 1
It is an irrefutable fact that nowadays the trend of making films is increasing in the film industries. While making a movie, the producers spend lots of pay. In my opinion, it is true that the filmmaker spends capital on the picture to make better quality and get profit after releasing. In this essay, I intend to discuss why investing money on movies and what are benefits before reasonable conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons why directors put their wealth to make successful video. Firstly, it is important to make a good quality and characters in the Video which is directly proportional to the high budget. Because of this, it is necessary to add animation or editing on high level, so that people can show their interest after watching the trailer. For an instance, according to the experts found that while making fast and furious, the makers add lots of stunts and special graphic content which almost cost around $1 millions. In addition, there is no doubt, people make a short clip to spread the valuable lesson to everyone. Therefore, they don’t spend extra cash on the clips but they earn by how many times people watched. Moreover, sometimes folks spend their fund on advertisements and promote their movie on live telecast serials. Furthermore, the Indian tv serial the Kapil Sharma program is the best example, because these shows always invite the actors to promote their movies. To put in a nutshell, the industry always makes different actions and set for the videos which cost automatically high. So that, people don’t get bored, entertain and enjoy the drama.
It is an irrefutable fact that nowadays the trend of making films is increasing in the film industries. While making a movie, the producers
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spend
lots of pay. In my opinion, it is true that the filmmaker
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spends
capital on the picture to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
better quality and
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get
profit after releasing. In this essay, I intend to discuss why investing money on movies and what are benefits
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before
reasonable conclusion can
be drawn
.

There are several reasons why directors put their wealth to
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make
successful video.
Firstly
, it is
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important
to
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make
a
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good
quality and characters in the Video which is
directly
proportional to the high budget.
Because of this
, it is necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
animation or editing on high level,
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so
that
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people
can
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show
their interest after watching the trailer. For an instance, according to the experts found that while making
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fast
and furious, the makers
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add
lots of stunts and special graphic content which almost cost around $1 millions.

In addition
, there is no doubt,
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people
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make
a short clip to spread the valuable lesson to everyone.
Therefore
, they don’t
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spend
extra cash on the clips
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but
they earn by how
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many
times
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people
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watched
.
Moreover
,
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sometimes
folks
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spend
their fund on advertisements and promote their movie on
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live
telecast serials.
Furthermore
, the Indian
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tv
serial the
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Kapil
Sharma program is the best example,
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because
these
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shows
always invite the actors to promote their movies.

To put in a nutshell, the industry always
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
actions and set for the videos which cost
automatically
high.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that,
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people
don’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
bored, entertain and enjoy the drama.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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