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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.10

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. v. 10
A major problem faced globally today, the one which matters the most is environmental degradation. Over a period of years, we have taken the environment for granted and exploited it beyond repair. Although everyone understands the importance of sustainability, there is hardly anyone fighting to protect it. This essay will speak about problem solving related to our habitat and whether it should be solved globally or nationally. Firstly, the worsening health of the earth, is a global worry, and a check is essential at the international level. For instance, the recent Amazon fire which broke out in Brazil, could not have been controlled without foreign intervention. The Amazon forests are the ''lungs of the Earth", and though the fire was in a specific country, the impact is felt worldwide. It could have been further prevented if quick actions were taken and the flames was nipped in the bud. Subsequently, dealing with environmental problems nationally, hasn't turned out to be too productive. To illustrate, the Indian government claims that the forest area in India has gone up by 3% in the last decade, but in reality, it has depreciated by more than 5%. The figures claimed and obtained, are consequently poles apart. This happens because there is no central, independent committee that would keep an eye on the ground activities of any governing body. Lastly, I believe matters of such grave concern should be handled unitedly. " Nature protects if it is protected. " To safeguard the interest of the future generations, adequate steps have to be taken today, and now, by humans of all nationalities together. We have solely contributed negatively towards nature, and we are the only species who can think of solutions for the betterment of the world around us.
A major problem faced globally
today
, the one which matters the most is environmental degradation. Over a period of years, we have taken the environment for granted and exploited it beyond repair. Although everyone understands the importance of sustainability, there is hardly anyone fighting to protect it. This essay will speak about problem solving related to our habitat and whether it should
be solved
globally or
nationally
.

Firstly
, the worsening health of the earth, is a global worry, and a
check
is essential at the international level.
For instance
, the recent Amazon fire which broke out in Brazil, could not have
been controlled
without foreign intervention. The Amazon forests are the ''lungs of the Earth
"
, and though the fire was in a specific country, the impact
is felt
worldwide. It could have been
further
prevented
if quick actions
were taken
and the flames
was nipped
in the bud.

Subsequently
, dealing with environmental problems
nationally
, hasn't turned out to be too productive. To illustrate, the Indian
government
claims that the forest area in India has gone up by 3% in the last decade,
but
in reality, it has depreciated by more than 5%. The figures claimed and obtained, are
consequently
poles apart. This happens
because
there is no central, independent committee that would
keep
an eye on the ground activities of any governing body.

Lastly
, I believe matters of such grave concern should
be handled
unitedly
.
"
Nature protects if it
is protected
.
"
To safeguard the interest of the future generations, adequate steps
have to
be taken
today
, and
now
, by humans of all nationalities together. We have
solely
contributed
negatively
towards nature, and we are the
only
species who can
think
of solutions for the betterment of the world around us.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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