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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.4

Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. v. 4
It is considered by many that e-books are more popularly used compared to printed books, but some believe that printed books will still be preferred by many others. In my opinion, I believe that both reading mediums will continue to be used in the future, depending on what they are used for. On one hand, people prefer using e-books due to its convenience. E-books are readily available in one's mobile telephone or tablet, therefore making e-books easier to access and bring everywhere. To illustrate this, a tablet can easily fit in a handbag compared to a big heavy book, which can be a nuisance to some people. In addition, e-books are retrievable online, which eliminates the purpose of going to bookstores to purchase books. For example, if a student needs immediate reading materials for her coursework, she can simply download or access the chapters online, which can save a lot of time. On the other hand, some people prefer reading from physical books compared to e-books. This is because reading from physical books gives a different experience compared to reading e-books. For instance, pages of written books may have a distinct authentic smell that some people may like, making them more inclined to purchasing and reading physical books. Moreover, some people may be an avid collector of written books, so owning and collecting them may be therapeutic. Finally, in my opinion, the usage of physical books and e-books would depend on what the book is used for. Take for example, if a student needs revision materials, it might be preferable to use their e-book version as it can be accessed from her phone which she can go through in her spare time. Meanwhile, if reading is a person's hobby, they might prefer using physical books as they feel that it gives them an experience that they cannot get with e-books. In conclusion, reading written or e-books would depend on its purpose. Even though the majority of people are currently advancing into utilizing e-books, written books should still be preserved.
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books
,
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but
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some
believe that printed
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will
still
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by
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many
others. In my opinion, I believe that both
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reading
mediums will continue to be
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used
in the future, depending on what they are
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used
for.

On one hand,
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people
prefer using e-books due to its convenience. E-books are
readily
available in one's mobile telephone or tablet,
therefore
making e-books easier to access and bring everywhere. To illustrate this, a tablet can
easily
fit in a handbag compared to a
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big
heavy
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book
, which can be a nuisance to
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some
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people
.
In addition
, e-books are retrievable online, which eliminates the purpose of going to bookstores to
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purchase
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books
.
For example
, if a student needs immediate
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reading
materials for her coursework, she can
simply
download or access the chapters online, which can save
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a lot of
time.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
prefer
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reading
from
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physical
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books
compared to e-books. This is
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because
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reading
from
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physical
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books
gives a
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different
experience compared to
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reading
e-books.
For instance
, pages of
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written
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books
may have a distinct authentic smell that
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some
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people
may like, making them more inclined to purchasing and
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reading
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physical
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books
.
Moreover
,
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some
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people
may be an avid collector of
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written
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books
,
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so
owning and collecting them may be therapeutic.

Finally
, in my opinion, the usage of
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physical
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books
and e-books would depend on what the
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book
is
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used
for. Take
for example
, if a student needs revision materials, it might be preferable to
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use
their e-book version as it can
be accessed
from her phone which she can go through in her spare time. Meanwhile, if
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reading
is a person's hobby, they might prefer using
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physical
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books
as they feel that it gives them an experience that they cannot
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get
with e-books.

In conclusion
,
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reading
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written
or e-books would depend on its purpose.
Even though
the majority of
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people
are
currently
advancing into utilizing e-books,
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written
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books
should
still
be preserved
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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