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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. v.7

Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. The growing issue of climate change has been argued and opinions differ about whether developed countries are obligated to fight climate change than developing nations while others believe that the duty to environmental conservation should be done by all countries. Developed countries are morally obligated to fight climate change because they are economically equipped to handle such problems. Developing nations are battling with poverty and increased mortality rate and do not have the resources necessary to handle such problem. for instance in europe, the government is pushing against coal and gas as a source for energy and embracing electric powered cars to fight climate change but most countries in Africa still make use. Hence developed countries should be at the fore front driving against climate change. On the other hand, some experts suggest it is important for all countries to be involved equally in battling climate change. This is because climate change is a universal problem and requires help on a global scale. Developing countries causes global warming and are also going to be impacted by climate change. In conclusion, despite all countries to actively involve in connecting climate change
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that developed
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have a higher responsibility to combat
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than
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. Others believe that all
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should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

Discuss both these views and give your
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own
opinion.

Write at least 250 words.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
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own
knowledge or experience.

The growing issue of
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climate
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has
been argued
and opinions differ about whether developed
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countries
are obligated
to fight
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climate
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than
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developing
nations while others believe that the duty to environmental conservation should
be done
by all countries.

Developed
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morally
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because
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economically
equipped to handle such problems.
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nations are battling with poverty and increased mortality rate and do not have the resources necessary to handle such problem.
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experts suggest it is
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. This is
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because
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is a universal problem and requires
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help
on a global scale.
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Developing
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countries
causes global warming and are
also
going to
be impacted
by
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.

In conclusion
, despite all
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involve in connecting
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IELTS essay Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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