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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment Discuss both these views v.17

Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment 17
Currently, the issue of climate change has become highly controversial. There are those who argue that all countries should be equally responsible when it comes to combating climate change, while others believe that developed countries have a greater responsibility than developing countries. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my overall opinion at the end, which is that climate change is a responsibility for every country. & nbsp; Generally, there are two main reasons why people believe that every country& nbsp; has a responsibility to prevent climate change. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favor of this idea is because the problem of climate change is unable to be solved by only a few participating countries. This is because it is a universal, global problem. Therefore, any solution to it will need to be on a global scale, too. A further point in favor& nbsp; of this argument is that because developing countries do not have as much technology and fund to cope with environmental problems compared to developed countries. Every country should therefore have responsibility. & nbsp; Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that developed countries have a bigger responsibility in combating climate change. The main reason is that developed countries are blamed for environmental pollution because they were able to develop through industrialization at the cost of environmental problems. Additionally, they have the responsibility to set the example, so introducing policy changes will encourage other nations to do the same. & nbsp; If they are interested in environmental pollution, developing countries will also be careful. & nbsp; In conclusion, this is a topic that is relevant to modern society. I believe that, all things considered, all countries should equally bear responsibility of environmental problems. If all nations tried to improve the environment problems in the world, it will certainly bring about better results.
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, the issue of
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climate
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change
has become
highly
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countries
should be
equally
responsible when it
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comes
to combating
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climate
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change
, while others believe that
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developed
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countries
have a greater
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responsibility
than developing
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countries
. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my
overall
opinion at the
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end
, which is that
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climate
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change
is a
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responsibility
for every country.

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people
believe that every
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; has a
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responsibility
to
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prevent
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climate
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change
. Perhaps the main reason why
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people
are in favor of this
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idea
is
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because
the
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problem
of
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is unable to
be solved
by
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only
a few participating
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countries
. This is
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because
it is a universal, global
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problem
.
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further
point in
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; of this argument is that
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because
developing
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countries
do not have as much technology and fund to cope with
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environmental
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problems
compared to
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developed
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countries
. Every
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country
should
therefore
have responsibility.

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Despite these arguments, there is
also
a case for the
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idea
that
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developed
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countries
have a bigger
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responsibility
in combating
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climate
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change
. The main reason is that
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developed
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countries
are blamed
for
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environmental
pollution
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because
they were able to develop through industrialization at the cost of
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environmental
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problems
.
Additionally
, they have the
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responsibility
to set the example,
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so
introducing policy
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changes
will encourage other nations to do the same.
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; If they
are interested
in
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environmental
pollution, developing
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countries
will
also
be careful.

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In conclusion
, this is a topic
that is
relevant to modern society. I believe that, all things considered, all
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countries
should
equally
bear
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responsibility
of
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environmental
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problems
. If all nations tried to
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improve
the environment
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problems
in the world, it will
certainly
bring about better results.
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45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment 17

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
318 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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