Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.16
Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.  16
There is no doubt that the human activities are the major cause of deteriorating climatic conditions. Hence, some part of society says, it to be the duty of the developed nations to curb this menace, while, I will go with those, who recommend it to be the onus on both the developing and the rich countries. This essay shall highlight why steps should be taken by each sector.
To commence with, there is no wrong in saying that the country, that has developed might have exhausted the most amount of non renewable fuel in comparison to other provinces. Thus, degrading the quality of air we breathe in. However, today, such territories have sufficient funds to serve the globe with Eco friendly techniques, to save the planet earth. For example, the richest areas like U. S. A can come forward to help countries like India, China, and Pakistan to buy renewable sources of energy to eliminate the filthy pollution.
Furthermore, every nation should create an awareness program for the residents to know about the global problem, so that efforts could be made at an individual level also. For instance, instruct people to walk to nearby distances, go for car pool for work, use of public transportation. Additionally, the native government has to make certain amendments in the laws regarding atmospheric conditions. If anybody is caught violating that rule, then they should be imposed fine for that.
In conclusion, I opine that only efforts by developed countries might not be sufficient to win this battle rather cumulative measures by both the rich, and the poor countries is mandatory in this arena, to make this planet worth living
There is no doubt that the human activities are the major cause of deteriorating climatic conditions.  
Hence
,  
some
 part of society says, it to be the duty of the developed nations to curb this menace, while, I will  
go with
 those, who recommend it to be the onus on both the developing and the rich  
countries
. This essay shall highlight why steps should  
be taken
 by each sector.
To commence with, there is no  
wrong
 in saying that the  
country
, that has developed might have exhausted the most amount of  
non renewable
 fuel  
in comparison
 to other provinces.  
Thus
, degrading the quality of air we breathe in.  
However
,  
today
, such territories have sufficient funds to serve the globe with Eco friendly techniques, to save the planet earth.  
For example
, the richest areas like U. S. A can  
come
 forward to  
help
  countries
 like India, China, and Pakistan to  
buy
 renewable sources of energy to eliminate the filthy pollution. 
Furthermore
, every nation should create an awareness program for the residents to know about the global problem,  
so
 that efforts could  
be made
 at an individual level  
also
.  
For instance
, instruct  
people
 to walk to nearby distances, go for car pool for work,  
use
 of public transportation.  
Additionally
, the native  
government
  has to
  make
 certain amendments in the laws regarding atmospheric conditions. If anybody  
is caught
 violating that  
rule
, then they should  
be imposed
 fine for that. 
In conclusion
, I opine that  
only
 efforts by developed  
countries
 might not be sufficient to win this battle  
rather
 cumulative measures by both the rich, and the poor  
countries
 is mandatory in this arena, to  
make
 this planet worth living
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