Some people think that computer games are bad for children, while others believe that they are useful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer games and give your own opinion. v.1
Some people think that computer games are bad for children, while others believe that they are useful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer games and give your own opinion. v. 1
Some would argue that online games are not good for kids. While, other consider that they can be beneficial. Although, video games are benefits young people, but I believe that children adopt this kind of lazy lifestyle and ignore physical activities does deteriorate health.
The main advantages of playing online games for young person, they can develop their language skills in an authenticate context. This may lead to the development of second language which can benefit in near future. For example, while playing online games a young child can chat to American or British teammates in games. It is a kind of the language learning process in an enjoyable way, games such as PUBG or WarCraft. Despite of, getting fluent in language, I believe, video games a addictive and it is hard for kids to get into other activities and when it comes to exercising they ignore and adopt a lazy lifestyle.
However, there are disadvantages to playing computer games, generally kids get addicted to these games and less involvement in physical activities. As these games are designed so well that on completion of each task participant wins points, this winning kicks on every stage in games releases dopamine in the brain thus a satisfaction for kids to get more such pleasure, eventually they get addicted to such video games and completely ignore exercising, thus gaining diseases such in diabetics and heart attacks in the future. For example, recently a survey on addictive video games people conducted by Oxford university found that the life span of these people is very short due to less physical activities and chances suffering of heart diseases is in these people.
To conclude, though video games are helpful to learn languages. However, I believe that physical activities do wonders in a person’s life fighting against diseases through willpower.
Some
would argue that online
games
are not
good
for
kids
.
While
, other consider that they can be beneficial. Although,
video
games
are benefits young
people
,
but
I believe that children adopt this kind of lazy lifestyle and
ignore
physical
activities
does deteriorate health.
The main advantages of playing online
games
for young person, they can develop their
language
skills
in
an authenticate
context. This may lead to the development of second
language
which can benefit in near future.
For example
, while playing online
games
a young child can chat to American or British teammates in
games
. It is a kind of the
language
learning process
in an enjoyable way
,
games
such as PUBG or WarCraft.
Despite of
, getting fluent in
language
, I believe,
video
games
a
addictive and it is
hard
for
kids
to
get
into other
activities
and when it
comes
to exercising they
ignore
and adopt a lazy lifestyle.
However
, there are disadvantages to playing computer
games
,
generally
kids
get
addicted to these
games
and less involvement in
physical
activities
. As these
games
are designed
so
well that on completion of each task participant wins points, this winning kicks on every stage in
games
releases dopamine in the brain
thus
a satisfaction for
kids
to
get
more such pleasure,
eventually
they
get
addicted to such
video
games
and completely
ignore
exercising,
thus
gaining diseases such in diabetics and heart attacks in the future.
For example
, recently a survey on addictive
video
games
people
conducted by Oxford university found that the life span of these
people
is
very
short due to less
physical
activities
and chances
suffering of
heart diseases is in these
people
.
To conclude
, though
video
games
are helpful to learn
languages
.
However
, I believe that
physical
activities
do wonders in a person’s life fighting against diseases through willpower.
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37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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