There is a school of thoughts that believes that children should stay at home before seven years old. While reasons can be given to justify this, I content that children should go to school as soon as possible.
On the one hand, It is undeniable that parents usually take their off-springs to school very soon. After conceiving a baby, the mother has 6 months leave to take care of her children. After that, they immediately have to come back with their work. Therefore, it is compulsory that parents must find a nanny to look after their children. However, when progenies are around 2 or 3, parents opt for taking them to day-care center in order to provide them opportunities to develop themselves.
On the other hand, if children stay at home until they turn to 7, they could be lagged in the class because of having no chance to approach the developments of the updated teaching methods. Sending children to kindergartens from the fist stage of their life could afford them opportunities to make friends and learn other things from their peers. Take English skills as an example. In present days, children start learning English since they were little. They improve their English day in day out through playing games, communicating with foreign teachers and learning with their peers. This have positive results in learning English actively.
In conclusion, because of the reasons I mentioned above. I firmly hold the view that children should go to school as young as possible.
There is a
school
of thoughts that believes that
children
should stay at home
before
seven years
old
. While reasons can be
given
to justify this, I content that
children
should go to
school
as
soon
as possible.
On the one hand, It is undeniable that parents
usually
take their off-springs to
school
very
soon
. After conceiving a baby, the mother has 6 months
leave
to take care of her
children
. After that, they immediately
have to
come
back with their work.
Therefore
, it is compulsory that parents
must
find a nanny to look after their
children
.
However
, when
progenies
are around 2 or 3, parents opt for taking them to day-care center in order to provide them opportunities to develop themselves.
On the other hand
, if
children
stay at home until they turn to 7, they could
be lagged
in the
class
because
of having no chance to approach the developments of the updated teaching methods. Sending
children
to kindergartens from the fist stage of their life could afford them opportunities to
make
friends and learn other things from their peers. Take English
skills
as an example. In present days,
children
start
learning English since they were
little
. They
improve
their English day in day out through playing games, communicating with foreign teachers and learning with their peers.
This have
positive
results in learning English
actively
.
In conclusion
,
because
of the reasons I mentioned above. I
firmly
hold the view that
children
should go to
school
as young as possible.
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