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Some people think that children should study formal learning at school as young as possible. Others believe they should not go to school until they are at least 7. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people think that children should study formal learning at school as young as possible. Others believe they should not go to school until they are at least 7. v. 1
Diet plays a significant role in maintaining a good health. There are many people who find it difficult to maintain a healthy diet, which results in a lot of health issues. This essay will explain the problems associated with not following a healthy diet and how it can be solved. Many people these find it arduous to follow a proper diet. This is primarily because people are so busy with their work schedules that they do not find time to prepare food and carry it to the work place. Hence, they generally resort to street food, which usually is considered unhealthy. In addition, there are so many options to order food online these days, which deliver's food at the door step and makes it very convenient. For instance, people these days use apps such as Uber Eats and Swiggy to order food throughout the day sitting at home or from their workplace. These habits have caused people to consume more junk food rather than healthy food. Said that, it is not all that difficult to follow a proper diet. One needs to have a proper routine to make sure he/she has a healthy diet. Working people could better manage their time by following a proper routine and preparing food for themselves. Moreover, one must prefer to order healthy food such as green salads while ordering online to remain fit. For instance, one could find videos on social channels such as YouTube to find some easy hacks to prepare food in less time. This is will help them remain at the peak of their health always. In conclusion, most of the problems and difficulties faced by people to maintain a healthy eating habits are because of the time constraints and convenience, however, if someone is really dedicated and doesn't procrastinate then this issue can be resolved easily.
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people
who
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healthy
diet, which results in
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a lot of
health issues. This essay will
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explain
the problems associated with not following a
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healthy
diet and how it can
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.

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people
these
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find
it arduous to follow a
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proper
diet. This is
primarily
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people
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busy with their work schedules that they do not
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find
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time
to prepare
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food
and carry it to the work place.
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, they
generally
resort to street
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food
, which
usually
is considered
unhealthy.
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so
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options to order
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online these days, which
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food
at the door step and
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convenient.
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these days
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apps such as Uber Eats and
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to order
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food
throughout the day sitting at home or from their workplace. These habits have caused
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people
to consume more junk
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food
rather
than
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healthy
food.

Said that, it is not all that difficult to follow a
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proper
diet. One needs to have a
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proper
routine to
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make
sure he/she has a
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healthy
diet. Working
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people
could better manage their
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time
by following a
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proper
routine and preparing
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food
for themselves.
Moreover
, one
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must
prefer to order
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healthy
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food
such as green salads while ordering online to remain fit.
For instance
, one could
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find
videos on social channels such as YouTube to
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find
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some
easy hacks to prepare
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food
in less
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time
. This is will
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help
them remain at the peak of their health
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always
.

In conclusion
, most of the problems and difficulties faced by
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people
to maintain a
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healthy
eating
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habits
are
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because
of the
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time
constraints and convenience,
however
, if someone is
really
dedicated and doesn't procrastinate then this issue can
be resolved
easily
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that children should study formal learning at school as young as possible. Others believe they should not go to school until they are at least 7. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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