Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. v.3
Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. v. 3
People learn through their entire lives. Curiosity was always the basic characteristic of a human being. We always want to break limits and learn more. At this point, some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and spend most of their time on school studies. This will help them to succeed in the future. However, for several reasons, which I will explain bellow, I think that children should not study at a very early age.
Of course, children who begin to study at a very early age have more chances to succeed in the future. They gain more knowledge and experience which are priceless and valuable. In addition, studying more now they will give them the opportunity to perfect their knowledge in the future and become better professionals.
However, I think that every child must have his or her childhood. Children should learn through playing and communication with their friends and parents. I think that such basic qualities as kindness, self-confidence and just a good sense of humour can not be gained from studying. Children should more time spend with their family, playing and learning with their parents. Imagine that a child instead of playing with his friends does his homework and feel exhausted and tired. Another important aspect of this is that children at their early ages need more exercise because at this age the development of their body is an essential aspect. Children, first of all, must be healthy.
To sum up, I think that children should have their careless childhood with no responsibilities. Moreover, I am sure that playing helps them develop not only their bones and muscles but their ability to make decisions, analyse things, make conclusions, which is very good for their future.
People
learn through their entire
lives
. Curiosity was always the basic characteristic of a human being. We always want to break limits and learn more. At this point,
some
people
think
that
children
should
begin
their formal education at a
very
early
age
and spend most of their time on school studies. This will
help
them to succeed in the
future
.
However
, for several reasons, which I will
explain
bellow, I
think
that
children
should not study at a
very
early
age.
Of course
,
children
who
begin
to study at a
very
early
age
have more chances to succeed in the
future
. They gain more knowledge and experience which are priceless and valuable.
In addition
, studying more
now
they will give them the opportunity to perfect their knowledge in the
future
and become better professionals.
However
, I
think
that every child
must
have
his or her
childhood.
Children
should learn through
playing
and communication with their friends and parents. I
think
that such basic qualities as kindness, self-confidence and
just
a
good
sense of
humour
can not
be gained
from studying.
Children
should more time spend with their family,
playing
and learning with their parents. Imagine that a child
instead
of
playing
with his friends does his homework and feel exhausted and tired. Another
important
aspect of this is that
children
at their
early
ages
need more exercise
because
at this
age
the development of their body is an essential aspect.
Children
,
first of all
,
must
be healthy.
To sum up, I
think
that
children
should have their careless childhood with no responsibilities.
Moreover
, I am sure that
playing
helps
them develop not
only
their bones and muscles
but
their ability to
make
decisions,
analyse
things,
make
conclusions, which is
very
good
for their
future
.
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29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes