I do not agree with the statement that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. I state my opinion on the following points. First of all, every company must have its moral code. It means that a company should treat its clients properly and respect their rights.
Of cause a company may lose a part of its profit but the security of its clients must be in the first place. Otherwise, clients will switch to another company and never be back. For instance, a few years ago "Jonson & Jonson" produced a new type of painkillers. Unfortunately, this product was not tested properly. As a result of this, many people died and received injuries. The president of the company made a crucial decision to call back all painkillers from all distributors and pay to all injured customers for their treatment. It cost a lot of money for the company but it saved its image and clients. It was a very difficult decision, but the president of the company understood that it would cost him even more in the future because he would not be able to return clients' respect. Losing customers means for a company losing its profit.
Second of all, in order to succeed in the modern world companies have to compete with each other. Many companies lose their profit decreasing prices on their products. They do not aspire for extra profit but for clients' satisfaction. Companies do it because they want their products sold and their customers satisfied. They offer discounts, free delivery, free service, free Internet access, good return service, etc. All these are done to make their old customers happy and attract new clients.
To sum up, I think a company, which the only goal is profit will not succeed nowadays. Otherwise, companies that respect their clients and want to see them satisfied will make a fortune.
I do not
agree
with the statement that businesses should do anything they can to
make
a
profit
. I state my opinion on the following points.
First of all
, every
company
must
have its moral code. It means that a
company
should treat its
clients
properly
and respect their rights.
Of cause
a
company
may lose a part of its
profit
but
the security of its
clients
must
be in the
first
place.
Otherwise
,
clients
will switch to another
company
and never be back.
For instance
, a few years ago
"
Jonson & Jonson
"
produced a new type of painkillers. Unfortunately, this product was not
tested
properly
.
As a result
of this,
many
people
died
and received injuries. The president of the
company
made a crucial decision to call back all painkillers from all distributors and pay to all injured
customers
for their treatment. It cost
a lot of
money for the
company
but
it saved its image and
clients
. It was a
very
difficult decision,
but
the president of the
company
understood that it would cost him even more in the future
because
he would not be able to return clients' respect. Losing
customers
means for a
company
losing its profit.
Second of all, in order to succeed in the modern world
companies
have to
compete with each other.
Many
companies
lose their
profit
decreasing prices on their products. They do not aspire for extra
profit
but
for clients' satisfaction.
Companies
do it
because
they want their products sold and their
customers
satisfied. They offer discounts, free delivery, free service, free Internet access,
good
return service, etc. All these
are done
to
make
their
old
customers
happy and attract new clients.
To sum up, I
think
a
company
, which the
only
goal is
profit
will not succeed nowadays.
Otherwise
,
companies
that respect their
clients
and want to
see
them satisfied will
make
a fortune.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes