People have different views regarding whether the school ought to focus in competition or in cooperation as a team. This essay aims to see both side perspectives.
On one hand, who learn to compete in school often do better. They learned to develop their skills and confidence, since children feel challenged when they have direct competition with their classmate. For example, the recent studies show that the student who expose more in competing. Improves their creativity in solving problems that will help them later in life. Furthermore, it is commonly believed this kind of skills are vital to succeed as an adult, and can be used as skills in competing in the job market.
On the other hand, it often taught that is better if children focus on cooperating with others in a team.
Since we are always dealing with each other, we should teach also to socialize and how to deal with others. Another reason, why this is beneficial in life, it helps to develop their personality in negotiating and confronting conflicts in a constructive way. This skill might be useful in their future.
In conclusion, many people think children need to become more competitive, whereas others think it is best for a child to focus on working together.
People
have
different
views regarding whether the school ought to
focus in
competition or in cooperation as a team. This essay aims to
see
both side perspectives.
On one hand, who learn to compete in school
often
do better. They learned to develop their
skills
and confidence, since children feel challenged when they have direct competition with their classmate.
For example
, the recent studies
show
that the student who expose more in competing.
Improves
their creativity in solving problems that will
help
them later in life.
Furthermore
, it is
commonly
believed this kind of
skills
are vital to succeed as an adult, and can be
used
as
skills
in competing in
the job market.
On the
other
hand, it
often
taught
that is
better if children focus on cooperating with others in a team.
Since we are always dealing with each
other
, we should teach
also
to socialize and how to deal with others. Another reason, why this is beneficial in life, it
helps
to develop their personality in negotiating and confronting conflicts
in a constructive way
. This
skill
might be useful in their future.
In conclusion
,
many
people
think
children need to become more competitive, whereas others
think
it is best for a child to focus on working together.
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