It is thought that children can learn to distinguish between bad things and good things when they are little boys and girls by punishing them when they did wrong. In my opinion, I completely disagree with it and will explain it in this essay.
Children need to understand what things they can do and what things they cannot do when they are at an early age. Although punishing them may make them realize that they have conducted wrong things and force them to remember not to do the same wrong thing again. Adults always used to criticize kids with blame words even corporal punishment in order to give them a lesson and force them to memorize it forever. Such punishments are too powerful for little children because their minds and bodies are under development. In other words, children who suffer the penalty will have a painful memory, which may affect their career and life negatively and unhealthy.
Seriously, children who fear to be punished will find a way to avoid punishment rather than learning from the mistakes. That is, the penalty cannot be used to teach young children how to tell the difference between correct and incorrect when children have only received blame or physical punishment. In that situation, they just want to avoid being punished again so that they gradually become liars and do not want any responsibilities when growing up. Thus, it is not a good way for children to learn rules from rebuke, hit and fire when they are very young.
In conclusion, I think punishment can cause harm to young children mentally and physically and push them to tell lie so that I do not agree with the opinion that it is necessary for children to understand right and wrong by punishment.
It is
thought
that
children
can learn to distinguish between
bad
things and
good
things when they are
little
boys and girls by punishing them when they did
wrong
. In my opinion, I completely disagree with it and will
explain
it in this essay.
Children need to understand what things they can do and what things they cannot do when they are at an early age. Although punishing them may
make
them realize that they have conducted
wrong
things and force them to remember not to do the same
wrong
thing again. Adults always
used
to criticize kids with blame words even corporal
punishment
in order to give them a lesson and force them to memorize it forever. Such
punishments
are too powerful for
little
children
because
their minds and bodies are under development.
In other words
,
children
who suffer the penalty will have a painful memory, which may affect their career and life
negatively
and unhealthy.
Seriously
,
children
who fear to
be punished
will find a way to avoid
punishment
rather
than learning from the mistakes.
That is
, the penalty cannot be
used
to teach young
children
how to
tell
the difference between correct and incorrect when
children
have
only
received blame or physical
punishment
. In that situation, they
just
want to avoid
being punished
again
so
that they
gradually
become liars and do not want any responsibilities when growing up.
Thus
, it is not a
good
way for
children
to learn
rules
from
rebuke, hit and fire when they are
very
young.
In conclusion
, I
think
punishment
can cause harm to young
children
mentally and
physically
and push them to
tell
lie
so
that I do not
agree
with the opinion that it is necessary for
children
to understand right and
wrong
by
punishment
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes