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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. v. 1
It is said that human waste is the greatest threat to the planet; therefore recycling and reducing waste is the wisest thing a human can do to curtail further damage. Some people are of the view that schools should teach their pupils about recycling and avoiding waste, while others believe that parents should be responsible for teaching their children about this. This essay will discuss both the views and a conclusion will be drawn. On the one hand, people who put forward the notion that the schools are significant in imbibing these values can argue that children will learn from professional teachers. In other words, teachers can explain the benefits of recycling and the drawbacks of waste more efficiently. Furthermore, schools have specific subjects, which explain the damage done by the waste and what can be done to reduce it. For instance, in geography subject pictures and graphs are used to explain the problem of waste and different ways of recycling is given. Therefore, schools can be of great value in teaching the importance of recycling and reducing waste. On the other hand, some people advocate that children spend more time with their parents at home and more wastage is produced at home. As a result, it would be easier for children to learn from their parents on how to recycle waste produced at home. In conclusion, professional teachers and specific subjects in schools can be beneficial for learning about recycling and waste, while parents can practically demonstrate how to reduce waste. In my opinion, both are equally important for a child.
It
is said
that human
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waste
is the greatest threat to the planet;
therefore
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recycling
and reducing
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waste
is the wisest thing a human can do to curtail
further
damage.
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Some
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people
are of the view that
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schools
should teach their pupils about
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recycling
and avoiding
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waste
, while others believe that
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parents
should be responsible for teaching their
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children
about this. This essay will discuss both the views and a conclusion will
be drawn
.

On the one hand,
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people
who put forward the notion that the
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schools
are significant in imbibing these values can argue that
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children
will learn from professional teachers.
In other words
, teachers can
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explain
the benefits of
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recycling
and the drawbacks of
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waste
more
efficiently
.
Furthermore
,
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schools
have specific subjects, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
the damage done by the
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waste
and what can
be done
to
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reduce
it.
For instance
, in geography subject pictures and graphs are
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used
to
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explain
the problem of
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waste
and
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different
ways of
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recycling
is
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given
.
Therefore
,
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schools
can be of great value in teaching the importance of
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recycling
and reducing waste.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
advocate that
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children
spend more time with their
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parents
at home and more wastage
is produced
at home.
As a result
, it would be easier for
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children
to learn from their
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parents
on how to recycle
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waste
produced at home.

In conclusion
, professional teachers and specific subjects in
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schools
can be beneficial for learning about
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recycling
and
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waste
, while
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parents
can
practically
demonstrate how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
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waste
. In my opinion, both are
equally
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important
for a child.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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