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Some people think that children should be taught at school how to avoid waste and recycle. Others think that children should learn this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people think that children should be taught at school how to avoid waste and recycle. Others think that children should learn this at home. v. 1
In the recent times, we have seen a huge concern on towards the increase of wastage across the world. Some people, tend to believe that wastage and recycling of products should be taught to children at schools, whereas some believe a children need to be taught at home. In my essay I will share my views on both opinions. To begin with, there are many advantages to teach the child the benefits of recycling and wastage at school. The school can add a course on wastage and recycling of products which, will help create awareness. When the child is made aware about the importance of recycling and avoiding wastage, they tend to become more cautious. In addition, the child also, learns from his surroundings, when he sees that his fellow students are taking steps to reduce wastage and recycle products, he will also get influenced and will engage in practising the same. On the other hand, the parents also need to educate the child on the effects of the wastage of products. It can start with small steps, such as ensuring the child does not waste any food. The parent can also give responsibility to the child, where he would have to ensure that, the right products are disposed at the right bin. In conclusion, it is important in todays world for the child to be aware of waste reduction and recycling of products. However, a joint effort needs to be made by the school and the parents in order to educate and make the child practice this in reality.
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seen
a huge concern on towards the increase of
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wastage
across the world.
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people
, tend to believe that
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wastage
and
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recycling
of
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products
should
be taught
to children at
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schools
, whereas
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some
believe
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a children
need to
be taught
at home. In my essay I will share my views on both opinions.

To
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begin
with, there are
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many
advantages to teach the
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child
the benefits of
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recycling
and
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wastage
at
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school
. The
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school
can
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add
a course on
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wastage
and
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recycling
of
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products
which, will
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help
create awareness. When the
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child
is made
aware about the importance of
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recycling
and avoiding
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wastage
, they tend to become more cautious.
In addition
, the
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child
also
, learns from his surroundings, when he
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sees
that his fellow students are taking steps to
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reduce
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wastage
and recycle
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products
, he will
also
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get
influenced and will engage in
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practising
the same.

On the other hand
, the parents
also
need to educate the
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child
on the effects of the
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wastage
of
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products
. It can
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start
with
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small
steps, such as ensuring the
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child
does not waste any food. The parent can
also
give responsibility to the
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child
, where he would
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have to
ensure that, the right
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products
are disposed
at the right bin.

In conclusion
, it is
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important
in
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todays
world for the
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child
to be aware of waste reduction and
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recycling
of
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products
.
However
, a joint effort needs to
be made
by the
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school
and the parents in order to educate and
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make
the
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child
practice this in reality.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think that children should be taught at school how to avoid waste and recycle. Others think that children should learn this at home. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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