There has been a significant increase in travelling over the last few years. People tend to travel for the sake of entertainment, exploration and business activities. Some people argue that travellers should obey and respect about religious beliefs and tradition of the countries they visited. Others claim that visitors are not bound to practice the local people beliefs and should have the independence to live according to their own set of rules. I strongly believe that foreigners must act accordingly to the traits and norms of visiting country.
It is commonly seen that some of the travellers do not care about others sentiments and they like to perform their own rituals openly in public places. They claim that it is permissible in free and open society. However, this could have detrimental effects as some people could act violently and can create riots in a society.
On the other side, it is our moral and ethical duty to respect others religions. Being as a visitor one has to follow the customs, traditions and traits of the destination country. This will help them in knowing about cultures and others traits of the society. This will also leave a positive message to the local people.
To conclude, I would like to say that tourists represent their country and their acts and behaviour can help in developing their good image to outside world. Therefore, travellers and business people should mould themselves according to place and situation; it is also a natural phenomenon that ‘gives respect take respect’.
There has been a significant increase in travelling over the last few years.
People
tend to travel for the sake of entertainment, exploration and business activities.
Some
people
argue that
travellers
should obey and
respect
about religious beliefs and tradition of the countries they visited. Others claim that visitors are not bound to practice the local
people
beliefs and should have the independence to
live
according to their
own
set of
rules
. I
strongly
believe that foreigners
must
act
accordingly
to the traits and norms of visiting country.
It is
commonly
seen
that
some of the
travellers
do not care about others
sentiments and
they like to perform their
own
rituals
openly
in public places. They claim that it is permissible in free and open society.
However
, this could have detrimental effects as
some
people
could act
violently
and can create riots in a society.
On the
other
side, it is our moral and ethical duty to
respect
others religions. Being as a visitor one
has to
follow the customs, traditions and traits of the destination country. This will
help
them in knowing about cultures
and others
traits of the society. This will
also
leave
a
positive
message to the local
people
.
To conclude
, I would like to say that tourists represent their country and their acts and
behaviour
can
help
in developing their
good
image to outside world.
Therefore
,
travellers
and business
people
should
mould
themselves according to place and situation; it is
also
a natural phenomenon that ‘gives
respect
take
respect’
.
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10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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