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Some people think that bicycle is the best way to travel from place to place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by bicycle. v.1

Some people think that bicycle is the best way to travel from place to place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by bicycle. v. 1
Many people believe that the bicycle is the most effective mode of transportation. There are many benefits and drawbacks to traveling by bicycle. On the one hand, there are many clear advantages of traveling from place to place by using a bicycle. On the environmental perspective, bicycles are considered to be the viable alternative means of transport owing to its inherently environmentally friendly quality. Unlike many other vehicles, the bicycle is safe to our surroundings because it does not emit carbon dioxin which is regarded as one of the prime causes of greenhouse warming. Besides, nearly everyone can afford a bicycle as it is low-cost and requires little maintenance work. Above all, traveling by bicycle make riders exert energy so that it helps them to improve their health which is gradually detrimentally affected by the sedentary way of living. On the other hand, there are certain disadvantages to bicycles. The reason why many people still favor other vehicles such as cars or trains over bicycles is that bicycle is only suitable for a short distance. People may opt for a bike when it comes to strolling around a small town but they are unlikely to do so if they are going to commute from one State to another. Moreover, many commuters considered using bicycles is a waste of time given the fast-pace of lives in many metropolises. Because working people are deemed to be busier than ever before, they are struggling to juggle between work and life. This demands more time available to them for overcoming hectic working schedule as well as for recreational activities. Using a bicycle to travel to and from work do nothing but prevent them from getting right such work-life balance. In conclusion, traveling by bike has certain benefits and drawbacks. It would depend on individual circumstances for deciding whether to choose a bicycle for traveling.
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believe that the
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bicycle
is the most effective mode of transportation. There are
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benefits and drawbacks to traveling by bicycle.

On the one hand, there are
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many
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clear
advantages of traveling from place to place by using a
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bicycle
. On the environmental perspective,
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bicycles
are considered
to be the viable alternative means of transport owing to its
inherently
environmentally
friendly quality. Unlike
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many
other vehicles, the
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bicycle
is safe to our surroundings
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because
it does not emit carbon dioxin which
is regarded
as one of the prime causes of greenhouse warming.
Besides
,
nearly
everyone can afford a
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bicycle
as it is low-cost and requires
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little
maintenance work.
Above all
, traveling by
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bicycle
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make
riders exert energy
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so
that it
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helps
them to
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improve
their health which is
gradually
detrimentally
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affected
by the sedentary way of living.

On the other hand
, there are certain disadvantages to
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bicycles
. The reason why
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people
still
favor other vehicles such as cars or trains over
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bicycles
is that
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bicycle
is
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only
suitable for a short distance.
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People
may opt for a bike when it
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comes
to strolling around a
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small
town
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they are unlikely to do
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so
if they are going to commute from one State to another.
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,
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commuters considered using
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bicycles
is a waste of time
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given
the
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fast
-pace of
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lives
in
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many
metropolises.
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Because
working
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people
are deemed
to be busier than ever
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before
, they are struggling to juggle between work and life. This demands more time available to them for overcoming hectic working schedule
as well
as for recreational activities. Using a
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bicycle
to travel to and from work do nothing
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but
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prevent
them from getting right such work-life balance.

In conclusion
, traveling by bike has certain benefits and drawbacks. It would depend on individual circumstances for deciding whether to choose a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycle
for traveling.
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IELTS essay Some people think that bicycle is the best way to travel from place to place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling by bicycle. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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