Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people think studying on campus is the most effective way to learn while others believe that studying online is more effective, Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.1

Some people think studying on campus is the most effective way to learn while others believe that studying online is more effective, v. 1
Nowadays, there has been a colossal of different learning platforms. It is believed by a school of thought that tertiary learning done on campus is more valuable as compared to learning via the web. I opine to the fact that studying on campus. This essay will discuss online learning as the most effective studying avenue. To begin with, online learning is more cost efficient as one's ability to manage one's finances often times without loans. While this is cheaper, it also saves time. For example, by studying online, it is possible to attend lectures in the comfort of one's home through the use of internet connection. This form of studying is equivalent or rather, better off when compared to studying on campus. Furthermore, web based learning is flexible as lectures are often times already prepared for to watch at one's own time. More so, it is able to cater for the old who sees themselves as too aged to partake in campus studying. In contrast, campus learning does not cut across all boards in the sense that it is most often times limited to a particular age group. For instance, an aged man might be reluctant to learn with much younger people. However, with the online system of learning, the elderly could learn in their comfort area or environment. This on the other hand, encourages good confidence level whilst also makes them happy. In conclusion, this essay has discussed the efficiency of online learning as against campus learning. Online learning plays some major significant roles such as cubbing excess financial issues and encourages better management of time.
Nowadays, there has been
The phrase 'a colossal of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'a' and 'of'.
a colossal of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
platforms. It
is believed
by a school of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that tertiary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
done on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campus
is more valuable as compared to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
via the web. I opine to the fact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campus
. This essay will discuss
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
as the most effective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
avenue.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
is more
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
cost efficient
as one's ability to manage one's finances
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
without loans. While this is cheaper, it
also
saves
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
For example
, by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
, it is possible to attend lectures in the comfort of one's home through the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of internet connection. This form of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
is equivalent or
rather
, better off when compared to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campus
.
Furthermore
, web based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
is flexible as lectures are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
already prepared for to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
at one's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. More
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, it is able to cater for the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sees
themselves as too aged to partake in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campus
studying.

In contrast
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
does not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
across all boards in the sense that it is most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
limited to a particular age group.
For instance
, an aged
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
might be reluctant to learn with much younger
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
However
, with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
system of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
, the elderly could learn in their comfort area or environment. This
on the other hand
, encourages
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
confidence level whilst
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
them happy.

In conclusion
, this essay has discussed the efficiency of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
as against
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
plays
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
major significant roles such as
Possible spelling mistake found.
cubbing
excess financial issues and encourages better management of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think studying on campus is the most effective way to learn while others believe that studying online is more effective, v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts