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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people think news has no connection to people's lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. v. 2
People believe that there is no correlation between individuals’ lives and news, then there should be no need to spend time on the newspaper and television. While it is true that some articles are not related to daily life to some extent, I would argue the necessity to update material on every kind of media. To begin with, there are several reasons for the disconnection between news and people. First, there are many authenticated news, which are not served and reflected in what individuals live and behave. This can be seen in some articles, they attempted to appeal to people’s attraction by showing something against norms of society. Second, some information on newspaper and television programs couldn’t contribute to the development of next generation. For instance, many entertainment news has been appeared on channels, which made up a huge time of young people’s interaction and have no meaning for their knowledge and abilities. However, I believe that we should spare some time to get information from these intermediaries. Firstly, a great amount of domestic and international events are frequently announced on national television channels or national portals, which help people update the current issues and know how to prevent it when it occurs. For example, when N-COVID 19 epidemic exploded, Vietnam actively propagandized solutions to its citizens on protecting their own health and ways of disease prevention. Secondly, individuals having a habit of reading daily news will broaden their knowledge and support for their disciplines. For instance, there is much news about the recent situation of the worldwide economy, such as supply and demand of products, foreign trade, exchange rate and vice versa for economics students to apply the real practice to their lessons. In conclusion, some bulletins broadcasted are not correspondent to human activities, which couldn’t be beneficial to improve people's lives. However, it is vital to build a tradition of seeing information from every type of media for enhancing awareness of people.
People
believe that there is no correlation between individuals’
lives
and
news
, then there should be no need to spend time on the newspaper and television. While it is true that
some
articles are not related to daily life to
some
extent, I would argue the necessity to update material on every kind of media.

To
begin
with, there are several reasons for the disconnection between
news
and
people
.
First
, there are
many
authenticated
news
, which are not served and reflected in what individuals
live
and behave. This can be
seen
in
some
articles, they attempted to appeal to
people’s
attraction by showing something against norms of society. Second,
some
information on newspaper and television programs couldn’t contribute to the development of
next
generation.
For instance
,
many entertainment
news
has
been appeared
on channels, which made up a huge time of young
people’s
interaction and have no meaning for their knowledge and abilities.

However
, I believe that we should spare
some
time to
get
information from these intermediaries.
Firstly
, a great amount of domestic and international
events
are
frequently
announced on national television channels or national portals, which
help
people
update the
current
issues and know how to
prevent
it when it occurs.
For example
, when N-COVID 19 epidemic exploded, Vietnam
actively
propagandized solutions to its citizens on protecting their
own
health and ways of disease prevention.
Secondly
, individuals having a habit of reading daily
news
will broaden their knowledge and support for their disciplines.
For instance
, there is much
news
about the recent situation of the worldwide economy, such as supply and demand of products, foreign trade, exchange rate and vice versa for economics students to apply the real practice to their lessons.

In conclusion
,
some
bulletins broadcasted are not correspondent to human activities, which couldn’t be beneficial to
improve
people
's
lives
.
However
, it is vital to build a tradition of seeing information from every type of media for enhancing awareness of
people
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people think news has no connection to people's lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. v. 2

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  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
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