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some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them discuss both these views and give your own opinion v.1

some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them 1
It is an undeniable fact that picturing life without friendship seems impossible. In fact, friends plays a major role in people’s lives as they allow them not to be alone and to have fun and entertainment in life. (Actually, friends, are crucial for not feeling alone and having fun and entertainment in life). Meanwhile, there has always been a heated debate regarding the controversial issue of which type of friends is the best similar opinion or different attitude friends. To my humble knowledge, I am inclined to believe that having similar opinion colleagues help to have a joyful life. It is popularly believed that having friends with different opinions than ours helps to learn different ideas and points of views (for learning different ideas and points of views). It is a matter of fact that if a person becomes a friend with another from different culture and horizon, he or she will learn about their culture, traditions, habits and languages. For instance, having connections with foreigners help many traders to have successful businesses. On the other hand, making friendships with similarly or likewise mind people is beneficial to be understood and supported in life, moreover it is vital to share the fun and bitter moments. Firstly, in effect, if the mate has the similar way of thinking, it will help his friends to avoid lots of problems that can come from misunderstandings such as making sarcastic jokes or awful comments. Furthermore, according to recent research done by Istanbul University, 90% of the surveyed students state that they prefer spending time with similar like friends as they find them more fun and entertaining. To sum it up, even though having different ideas is beneficial, having fun and support is more crucial. Therefore, it is obvious that owing friends with similar opinions is much better than having them with different points of views.
It is an undeniable fact that picturing
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life
without friendship seems impossible. In fact,
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friends
plays a major role in
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people
’s
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lives
as they
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allow
them not to be alone and to have
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fun
and entertainment in
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life
. (Actually,
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friends
, are crucial for not feeling alone and
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having
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fun
and entertainment in
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life)
. Meanwhile, there has always been a heated debate regarding the controversial issue of which type of
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friends
is the best
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similar
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opinion
or
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different
attitude
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friends
. To my humble knowledge, I
am inclined
to believe that
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having
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similar
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opinion
colleagues
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help
to have a joyful life.

It is
popularly
believed that
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having
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friends
with
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different
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opinions
than ours
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helps
to learn
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different
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ideas
and points of views (for learning
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different
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ideas
and points of views). It is a matter of fact that if a person becomes a
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friend
with another from
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different
culture and horizon, he or she will learn about their culture, traditions, habits and languages.
For instance
,
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having
connections with foreigners
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help
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many
traders to have successful businesses.

On the other hand
, making friendships with
similarly
or
likewise
mind
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people
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is
beneficial to
be understood
and supported in
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life
,
moreover
it is vital to share the
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fun
and bitter moments.
Firstly
, in effect, if the mate has the
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similar
way of thinking, it will
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help
his
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friends
to avoid lots of problems that can
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come
from misunderstandings such as making sarcastic jokes or awful comments.
Furthermore
, according to recent research done by Istanbul University, 90% of the surveyed students state that they prefer spending time with
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similar
like
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friends
as they find them more
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fun
and entertaining.

To sum it up,
even though
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having
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different
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ideas
is beneficial,
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having
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fun
and support is more crucial.
Therefore
, it is obvious that owing
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friends
with
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similar
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opinions
is much better than
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having
them with
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different
points of views.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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