People believe that educational institutions should include parenting as a compulsory subject. To a certain extent, I share a similar point of view with this statement, and I also believe that communication skill is essential to be trained to the pupils.
One reason why children ought to be taught about parenting in schools is that the pupils spend a large amount of their time in schools. In Indonesia, for instance, most of the students use up almost 9 to 10 hours a day in school and this makes educational institutions having sufficient time to provide parenting knowledge for the pupils. Moreover, if parenting becomes one of the mandatory subjects, the students will learn hard as they are afraid of being left behind or get poor marks. However, I also believe that parents play important roles in terms of educating the students about parenting. The parents have to show a good example for their children so that they have a role model to look for when they learn about parenting.
I am convinced that a good parent should master a good communication skill as they will require this ability to communicate with their children. One of the parent’s roles is to provide knowledge for children. Without profound communication ability, the parents might fail to transfer insight for their children. Thus, teaching how to maintain interpersonal and intrapersonal communication is essential for the students.
To sum up, I agree that parenting should be one of the mandatory subjects in schools and I also think that every good parent should master a good communication skill, so that they can communicate effectively with their children.
People
believe that educational institutions should include
parenting
as a compulsory subject. To a certain extent, I share a similar point of view with this statement, and I
also
believe that
communication
skill
is essential to
be trained
to the pupils.
One reason why
children
ought to
be taught
about
parenting
in
schools
is that the pupils spend a large amount of their time in
schools
. In Indonesia,
for instance
, most of the students
use
up almost 9 to 10 hours a day in
school
and this
makes
educational institutions having sufficient time to provide
parenting
knowledge for the pupils.
Moreover
, if
parenting
becomes one of the mandatory subjects, the students will learn
hard
as they are afraid of being
left
behind or
get
poor marks.
However
, I
also
believe that
parents
play
important
roles in terms of educating the students about
parenting
. The
parents
have to
show
a
good
example for their
children
so
that they have a role model to look for when they learn about parenting.
I
am convinced
that a
good
parent
should master a
good
communication
skill
as they will require this ability to communicate with their
children
. One of the
parent’s
roles is to provide knowledge for
children
. Without profound
communication
ability, the
parents
might fail to transfer insight for their
children
.
Thus
, teaching how to maintain interpersonal and intrapersonal
communication
is essential for the students.
To sum up, I
agree
that
parenting
should be one of the mandatory subjects in
schools
and I
also
think
that every
good
parent
should master a
good
communication
skill
,
so
that they can communicate
effectively
with their
children
.
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