Parenthood is considered one of the hardest titles to do justice with. A lot of people are simply lost and dont have enough knowledge to handle the title bestowed upon them. That's why some of us think its necessary that everyone should learn this as a skill and should know how to be a good parent, as a part of their formal education. I happen to agree with this opinion.
Firstly, schooling is almost a mandatory period in the life of most of world's population. It is this young and impressionable age where the mind is ready to grasp new ideas, quickly. Being a good parent is one of the most necessary requirement for a balanced and healthy household, which makes it the perfect thing to be included in the list of talents to be acquired. In other words, schools should also provide the social grooming to succeed in life, along with educational lessons.
Secondly, to be a good parent, a person needs to be social, responsible and mature. All of these traits are absolutely necessary to take care of a child, but also helps in the other aspects of life. For example, if a teenager knows what is expected of him/her to be a good parent, they would make a more focused effort to become an individual that can be a good mother or father.
Lastly, I believe the world would be a much better place, if every kid would have good parents and hence can get all the love and care that they deserve.
Parenthood
is considered
one of the hardest titles to do justice with.
A lot of
people
are
simply
lost and
dont
have
enough
knowledge to handle the title bestowed upon them. That's why
some
of us
think
its necessary that everyone should learn this as a
skill
and should know how to be a
good
parent
, as a part of their formal education. I happen to
agree
with this opinion.
Firstly
, schooling is almost a mandatory period in the life of most of world's population. It is this young and impressionable age where the mind is ready to grasp new
ideas
,
quickly
. Being a
good
parent
is one of the most necessary requirement for a balanced and healthy household, which
makes
it the perfect thing to
be included
in the list of talents to
be acquired
.
In other words
, schools should
also
provide the social grooming to succeed in life, along with educational lessons.
Secondly
, to be a
good
parent
, a person needs to be social, responsible and mature. All of these traits are
absolutely
necessary to take care of a child,
but
also
helps
in the other aspects of life.
For example
, if a
teenager
knows what is
expected
of him/her to be a
good
parent
, they would
make
a more focused effort to become an individual that can be a
good
mother or father.
Lastly
, I believe the world would be a much better place, if every kid would have
good
parents
and
hence
can
get
all the
love
and care that they deserve.
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