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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. v.3

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. v. 3
Couples nowadays are enrolling themselves in a parenting class to give their family a strong bond. Some people believe that the school must teach young students on how to be a good parent. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this matter provided by reason and what kind of skills the parents must have. To begin with, some school teach students about values and right conduct so that in the very young age, they already know how to be a good citizen. Teaching young people on how to be a good parent is a great idea to prepare them to be one in the future. A good parent must have a strong family bond which they are cherished and taught them virtues in life. Moreover, arguments within family are impossible to avoid, but if the young person knows the importance of respect it will help them to solve problems easily. To be a good parent, an individual should know how to support and be faithful to their partner so that the children will grow with the love and care they planted. In addition, a parent must give their full attention to their child and spent time with them. Proper way of discipline is also important to know so that it can avoid behavioural problems that the child can develop. In conclusion, this essay argued that being a parent is hard because it requires skills that can learn from schools and help them to be prepared and be a good parent in the future.
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believe that the school
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students on how to be a
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. This essay will discuss why I completely
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skills
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parents
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teach students about values and right conduct
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age, they already
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how to be a
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citizen. Teaching
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on how to be a
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is a great
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to prepare them to be one in the future. A
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parent
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have a strong family bond which they
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them to solve problems
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To be a
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, an individual should
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how to support and be faithful to their partner
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that the children will grow with the
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love
and care they planted.
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parent
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give their full attention to their child and spent time with them. Proper way of discipline is
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behavioural
problems that the child can develop.

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parent
is
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hard
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it requires
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skills
that can learn from schools and
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them to
be prepared
and be a
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in the future.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Learn everything you can, anytime you can, from anyone you can; there will always come a time when you will be grateful you did.
Sarah Caldwell

IELTS essay Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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