It is often argued that school curricula should include community work, and pupils ought to do it free of charge. This essay will show that such experience at school can be beneficial for children as they learn to be better people and more responsible citizens of their country.
Undoubtedly, volunteering teaches people to empathise with others, not to be indifferent to others’ needs and lend a hand to strangers when it is needed. It is crucial that children acquire these qualities since a very early age, and schools can provide a great opportunity to do that. Looking from my vantage point, I can say that the school where I used to study made me a kinder, more considerate person when my fellow pupils and I participated in a special programme that was aimed at helping older people do housework.
Many educators around the world claim that it is important to make even young children aware of the fact that they are citizens of their country, and that they have their rights and responsibilities. Community service can certainly raise this awareness by showing that even very young people can improve the world around them. For example, in my hometown in Russia, schoolchildren are encouraged to collect recyclable materials such as plastic, paper and glass, and everything that is collected by them accounts for three-quarters of all recyclables in the region.
In conclusion, unpaid labour for the sake of a better neighbourhood has many advantages such as learning to be caring to others and to be in charge of what happens in one’s community. While some countries such as Russia has partly adopted community service for their curricula, more countries can incorporate this element in theirs in the future.
It is
often
argued that
school
curricula should include
community
work, and pupils ought to do it free of charge. This essay will
show
that such experience at
school
can be beneficial for children as they learn to be better
people
and more responsible citizens of their country.
Undoubtedly
, volunteering teaches
people
to
empathise
with others, not to be indifferent to others’ needs and lend a hand to strangers when it
is needed
. It is crucial that children acquire these qualities since a
very
early age, and
schools
can provide a great opportunity to do that. Looking from my vantage point, I can say that the
school
where I
used
to study made me a kinder, more considerate person when my fellow pupils and I participated in a special
programme
that
was aimed
at helping older
people
do housework.
Many
educators around the world claim that it is
important
to
make
even young children aware of the fact that they are citizens of their country, and that they have their rights and responsibilities.
Community
service can
certainly
raise this awareness by showing that even
very
young
people
can
improve
the world around them.
For example
, in my hometown in Russia, schoolchildren
are encouraged
to collect recyclable materials such as plastic, paper and glass, and everything that
is collected
by them accounts for three-quarters of all recyclables in the region.
In conclusion
, unpaid
labour
for the sake of a better
neighbourhood
has
many
advantages such as learning to be caring to others and to be in charge of what happens in one’s
community
. While
some
countries such as Russia has partly adopted
community
service for their curricula, more countries can incorporate this element in theirs in the future.
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