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Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. v.5

Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. v. 5
History tells about the old civilisations, their strategies, their way of living, world conflict and the ways people overcame it. So I don't agree that history has a little to tell us. The basic characteristics, sufferings, crisis and wit are same for all the ages of the human kind. The way people struggled to achieve a better life in the primitive time is very much similar to the present time. The ways may be different but the theme is same and there is lots of evidence that the study of past history reviles a new invention to the present people. Though it is true that history itself is disputed as it has been written by the winners and sometimes history differs from place to place. For example: according to Indian History, English came to rule the country and had destroyed the peaceful lifestyle there by treachery and cunning strategies but in English history the English are heroes and they claim to modernise the Indian. In my opinion, nonetheless history has it's invaluable importance to all of us will remain until the end of the human race. How could we know about the great people who had sacrificed their lives for the betterment of the world or those who have cruelly tried to bring suffering for people? History tells us a lot about the people of all centuries. History suggests the different techniques that can be malevolent or beneficial for a country by presenting practical evidence. Again, history tells us about the devastating wars and potentially warns us about the conflict of nations. History suggests us about the good and evil and helps us to choose the appropriate way.
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tells
about the
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old
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civilisations
, their strategies, their
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way
of living, world conflict and the
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ways
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people
overcame it.
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So
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agree
that
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history
has a
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little
to
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tell
us.

The basic characteristics, sufferings, crisis and wit are same for all the ages of the human kind. The
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way
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people
struggled to achieve a better life in the primitive time is
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very
much similar to the present time.
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The
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ways
may be
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different
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but
the theme is same and there is lots of evidence that the study of past
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history
reviles a new invention to the present
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people
. Though it is true that
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history
itself
is disputed
as it has
been written
by the winners and
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sometimes
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history
differs from place to place.
For example
: according to Indian
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History
, English came to
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rule
the country and had
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destroyed
the peaceful lifestyle there by treachery and cunning strategies
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but
in English
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history
the English are
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heroes and
they claim to
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modernise
the Indian. In my opinion, nonetheless
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history
has
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it's invaluable importance
to all of us will remain until the
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end
of the human race.

How could we know about the great
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people
who had sacrificed their
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lives
for the betterment of the world or those who have
cruelly
tried to bring suffering for
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people
?
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History
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tells
us a lot about the
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people
of all centuries.
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History
suggests the
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different
techniques that can be malevolent or beneficial for a country by presenting practical evidence. Again,
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history
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tells
us about the devastating wars and
potentially
warns us about the conflict of nations.
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History
suggests us about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and evil and
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helps
us to choose the appropriate
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way
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. v. 5

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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