Few people in the society consider that kids spending their day on Television, motion picture and Computer games are good, but a couple of other's think it is not so good
My thoughts on the topic is to let children spend their day with other kids playing and make fun, but it is important to give them their space to watch, play programmes and video games.
Childhood is the very happiest moment of our life. We don't have money to spend ourself, but we do have lots of happy moments to enjoy it with modern technology making it even wonderful. Personally, when I grew up there were very little gaming options and Videography now I have money and the technology, but I don't have enough time and age to enjoy those. So, I would definitely recommend parents to allow their younger one's to make use of technology to learn and play.
Would any spoil their own kids? , I would advise the public to be cautious about their juveniles getting engaged with TV and video games because it would create a great impact on their health. Spending their after school or weekends at one place is not so good for their health, which would bring them eye sight problem and obese. To keep these health issues on check parents should act wisely and let their children play outside in parks or outdoor games.
In the essay, I have discussed on my thoughts on how Adults should act with maturity and allow their children to get engaged in watching Television and videos at the same time make them spend time in parks and other sports.
Few
people
in the society consider that kids spending their day on Television, motion picture and Computer games are
good
,
but
a couple of other's
think
it is not
so
good
My thoughts on the topic is to
let
children spend their day with other kids playing and
make
fun,
but
it is
important
to give them their space to
watch
, play
programmes
and video games.
Childhood is the
very
happiest moment of our life. We don't have money to spend
ourself
,
but
we do have lots of happy moments to enjoy it with modern technology making it even wonderful.
Personally
, when I grew up there were
very
little
gaming options and Videography
now
I have money and the technology,
but
I don't have
enough
time and age to enjoy those.
So
, I would definitely recommend parents to
allow
their younger one's to
make
use
of technology to learn and play.
Would any spoil their
own
kids?
,
I would advise the public to be cautious about their juveniles getting engaged with TV and video games
because
it would create a great impact on their health. Spending their after school or weekends at one place is not
so
good
for their health, which would bring them
eye sight
problem and obese. To
keep
these health issues on
check
parents should act
wisely
and
let
their children play outside in parks or outdoor games.
In the essay, I have discussed on my thoughts on how Adults should act with maturity and
allow
their children to
get
engaged in watching Television and videos at the same time
make
them spend time in parks and other sports.
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