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Some people suggest that when we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.1

Some people suggest that when we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country. with this opinion? v. 1
The topic of whether people should learn about the cultures and lifestyles of a country when they are studying a new language is of concern for many people. Some people suggest that the understanding of culture and lifestyles of the local people plays a vital role in language learning while others disagree. As for me, I strongly agree that people should also learn about the cultures and lifestyles that is embraced on that country. Those who encourage learners to get familiar with the native cultures hold the following reasons. Firstly, it will boost the study interests of the students. As some students find that simply memorising the vocabularies and grammatical structures is boring and tedious, the foreign cultures such as living habits and local music seems interest people more, which can easily satisfy the learning desires of them. When people feel that the cultural background of a country is appealing, they are willing to put more effort on the subject. Secondly, the knowledge of lifestyles and speaking manners benefits the communication with the native speakers. In order to interpret the language more precisely, speakers should be able to use or understand, for example, the correct slangs and idioms in the sentences when delivering their ideas. This can only be achieved by investigation of the culture and mindset. However, there are some others say that it is a waste of time to investigate irrelevant things. Numbers of them believe that they will never travel to other countries, so it is unnecessary to comprehend the local characteristics. For example, some students who enroll in a language course just want to be more employable as being multilingual is ideal when hunting a job. Thus, only the very basic linguistic skills are needed as they do not want to spend time on irrelevance in the class. To sum up, I strongly recommend people to learn the cultural background and historical tradition because it can significantly improve the study efficiency.
The topic of whether
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people
should learn about the
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cultures
and
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lifestyles
of a country when they are studying a new
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language
is of concern for
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many
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people
.
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Some
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people
suggest that the understanding of
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culture
and
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lifestyles
of the local
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people
plays a vital role in
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language
learning while others disagree. As for me, I
strongly
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agree
that
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people
should
also
learn about the
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cultures
and
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lifestyles
that
is embraced
on that country.

Those who encourage learners to
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get
familiar with the native
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cultures
hold the following reasons.
Firstly
, it will boost the study interests of the students. As
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some
students find that
simply
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memorising
the vocabularies and grammatical structures is boring and tedious, the foreign
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cultures
such as living habits and local music seems interest
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people
more, which can
easily
satisfy the learning desires of them. When
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people
feel that the cultural background of a country is appealing, they are willing to put more effort on the subject.

Secondly
, the knowledge of
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lifestyles
and speaking manners benefits the communication with the native speakers. In order to interpret the
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language
more
precisely
, speakers should be able to
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use
or understand,
for example
, the correct
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slangs
and idioms in the sentences when delivering their
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ideas
. This can
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only
be achieved
by investigation of the
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culture
and mindset.

However
, there are
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some
others say that it is a waste of time to investigate irrelevant things. Numbers of them believe that they will never travel to other countries,
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so
it is unnecessary to comprehend the local characteristics.
For example
,
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some
students who enroll in a
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language
course
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just
want to be more employable as being multilingual is ideal when hunting a job.
Thus
,
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only
the
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very
basic linguistic
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skills
are needed
as they do not want to spend time on irrelevance in the
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class
.

To sum up, I
strongly
recommend
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people
to learn the cultural background and historical tradition
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because
it can
significantly
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improve
the study efficiency.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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Edward De Waal

IELTS essay Some people suggest that when we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country. with this opinion? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
325 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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