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In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.1

In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. v. 1
Language and society are inextricable bond as a chicken and an egg. It is the verbal expression of culture. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the growing consensus that the method to master a new speech is to understand the customs and lifestyles of the native country. On the one hand, it is a universal acknowledgement that verbal expression is the carrying of one nation’s culture. Firstly, because of the arrival of new communication, people can communicate and understand each other and they gradually form their customs and habits. Secondly, is an effective tool to bring everyone together by conveying their thoughts, feelings to others, thus creating the formation of society. This can be exemplified by various dialects in different English speaking countries, where people have a unique way of communicating with each other using typical slangs and manners. On the other hand, acquiring a new language through the lifestyles of other nations will helps people learning faster and using in the correct situations. By incentivizing the curiosity of human being, language takes inspiration for people to learn about the knowledge that they have not known before, thus promoting their motivation about learning a new language. Furthermore, many learners do not fully understand the meanings of some common language expressions. In some circumstances, it is no doubt that there are certain phrases which are considered too formal in a particular culture but informal in the other. As many linguists are often unaware and use a translation of mother-tongue locution, they may accidentally offend the indigenous people. Therefore, it is crucial for every language learner to thoroughly understand the culture and traditions of the new areas in order to apply what they learn properly in real life context. In conclusion, it is undoubtedly needed to know about the ways of life of people if you have to learn a language well and avoid using it in unsuitable circumstances. A language is better learned when we know about the people and the country who own it.
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Language
and society are inextricable bond as a chicken and an egg. It is the verbal expression of
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culture
. In my opinion, I
strongly
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agree
with the growing consensus that the method to master a
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new
speech is to
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understand
the customs and lifestyles of the native country.

On the one hand, it is a universal
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acknowledgement
that verbal expression is the carrying of one nation’s
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culture
.
Firstly
,
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because
of the arrival of
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new
communication,
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people
can communicate and
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understand
each
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other and
they
gradually
form their customs and habits.
Secondly
, is an effective tool to bring everyone together by conveying their thoughts, feelings to others,
thus
creating the formation of society. This can
be exemplified
by various dialects in
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different
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English speaking
countries, where
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people
have a unique way of communicating with each
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other
using typical
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slangs
and manners.

On the
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other
hand, acquiring a
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new
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language
through the lifestyles of
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other
nations will
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helps
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people
learning faster and using in the correct situations. By incentivizing the curiosity of human being,
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language
takes inspiration for
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people
to learn about the knowledge that they have not known
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before
,
thus
promoting their motivation about learning a
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new
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language
.
Furthermore
,
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many
learners do not
fully
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understand
the meanings of
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some
common
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language
expressions. In
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some
circumstances, it is no doubt that there are certain phrases which
are considered
too formal in a particular
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culture
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but
informal in the
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other
. As
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many
linguists are
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often
unaware and
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use
a translation of mother-tongue locution, they may
accidentally
offend the indigenous
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people
.
Therefore
, it is crucial for every
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language
learner to
thoroughly
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understand
the
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culture
and traditions of the
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new
areas in order to apply what they learn
properly
in real life context.

In conclusion
, it is
undoubtedly
needed to know about the ways of life of
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people
if you
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have to
learn a
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language
well and avoid using it in unsuitable circumstances. A
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language
is better learned when we know about the
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people
and the country who
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own
it.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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