Some people say uniforms hinder children's personality at school and therefore, it should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? v.1
Some people say uniforms hinder children's personality at school and therefore, it should be banned. v. 1
Sports roles have been getting more important in young people's life for almost whole decades, because in sports we can spend our quality time by doing it nor watching it. Obviously, when watching sports like football, basketball, and so on, we often draw our attention to the best athletes on those fields, since they are likely to win sports competition. Then unconsciously, all of our focus will turn to one particular athlete who shows better performance than the others.
For instance, as the most favourable sports in the world, football always produced professional athletes who influenced youngster and these young peoples tend to follow their heroes whether it is their style of dressing or their work ethics. Not only that, professional athletes also created a passion for their follower, even they would mourn if their heroes had lost the match. Such enthusiasm can only be created by professional athletes who have big influences.
Though, it is good for having idols in sports, but sometimes it gets more indiscernible about how we see our sports figure. Do we keep thinking objectively in regards of their bad performances or we will keep supporting them blindly? However, they have the power to make their followers for supporting them excessively. Moreover, top athletes have huge popularity, so because of that it will affect young peoples to see sport only for gaining popularity.
To sum up, I would concede that athletes influences do depend on many factors. Despite many poor influences have been made by them, nevertheless we could not rule out the facts that they have shown a positive attitude through their hard-working ethic. Then, pro-athletes can be a role model for youngster as long as they only follow the positive way.
Sports
roles have been getting more
important
in young
people
's life for almost whole decades,
because
in
sports
we can spend our quality time by doing it nor watching it.
Obviously
, when watching
sports
like football, basketball, and
so
on, we
often
draw our attention to the best
athletes
on those fields, since they are likely to win
sports
competition. Then
unconsciously
, all of our focus will turn to one particular
athlete
who
shows
better performance than the others.
For instance
, as the most
favourable
sports
in the world, football always produced professional
athletes
who influenced youngster and these young peoples tend to follow their heroes whether it is their style of dressing or their work ethics. Not
only
that, professional
athletes
also
created a passion for their follower, even they would mourn if their heroes had lost the match. Such enthusiasm can
only
be created
by professional
athletes
who have
big
influences.
Though, it is
good
for having idols in
sports
,
but
sometimes
it
gets
more indiscernible about how we
see
our
sports
figure. Do we
keep
thinking
objectively
in regards of
their
bad
performances or
we will
keep
supporting them
blindly
?
However
, they have the power to
make
their followers for supporting them
excessively
.
Moreover
, top
athletes
have huge popularity,
so
because
of that it will affect young peoples to
see
sport
only
for gaining popularity.
To sum up, I would concede that
athletes
influences do depend on
many
factors. Despite
many
poor influences have
been made
by them,
nevertheless
we could not
rule
out the facts that they have shown a
positive
attitude through their
hard
-working ethic. Then, pro-athletes can be a role model for youngster as long as they
only
follow the
positive
way.
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