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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.9

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 9
Any language which is not officially spoken in a particular place is called a foreign language. In my opinion, learning a foreign language has many advantages beside its use for work or travelling. (32) We had seen in the past that people had a lack of knowledge as well as language skills. They used only one language and were completely unfamiliar with languages of other countries. Thus, there was no concept of learning a foreign language in the past. (44) Presently, the trend of learning international languages is spreading all over the world. Nowadays, people like to know the culture, traditions as well as languages of other countries. In this modern era of globalization, foreign language is not only necessary for those who frequently travelled to other countries or work abroad, but it is also a key skill for success in both academic and professional fields. For example, learning a foreign language is essential for students who want to go abroad for studies as they have to fulfil certain language requirements of universities. Similarly, the knowledge of foreign languages is compulsory for attracting customers around the globe in an online business network. (112) Due to recent development in Science and information technology, it has now become compulsory for people to have an additional skill of foreign language expertise. Thus, if the process of globalization keeps in motion, then the knowledge f foreign languages will surely become the need of the hour for various reasons. (51) Thus, in my opinion, knowledge of a foreign language is not only an entry requirement for travel or work abroad, but it is also a compulsory condition for everyone who wants to interact with the international community. (36)
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which is not
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foreign
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language
. In my opinion,
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learning
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foreign
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language
has
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many
advantages beside its
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use
for work or travelling. (32)

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seen
in the past that
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people
had a lack of
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knowledge
as well
as
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language
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skills
. They
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used
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only
one
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language
and were completely unfamiliar with
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languages
of other countries.
Thus
, there was no concept of
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learning
a
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foreign
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language
in the past. (44)

Presently
, the trend of
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learning
international
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languages
is spreading all over the world. Nowadays,
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people
like to know the culture, traditions
as well
as
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languages
of other countries. In this modern era of globalization,
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foreign
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language
is not
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only
necessary for those who
frequently
travelled to other countries or work abroad,
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but
it is
also
a key
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skill
for success in both academic and professional fields.
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,
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learning
a
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foreign
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language
is essential for students who want to go abroad for studies as they
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have to
fulfil certain
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language
requirements of universities.
Similarly
, the
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knowledge
of
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foreign
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languages
is compulsory for attracting customers around the globe in an online business network. (112)

Due to recent development in Science and information technology, it has
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now
become compulsory for
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people
to have an additional
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skill
of
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foreign
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language
expertise.
Thus
, if the process of globalization
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keeps
in motion, then the
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knowledge
f
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foreign
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languages
will
surely
become the need of the hour for various reasons. (51)

Thus
, in my opinion,
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knowledge
of a
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foreign
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language
is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
an entry requirement for travel or work abroad,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
also
a compulsory condition for everyone who wants to interact with the international community. (36)
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 9

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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