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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both these views and give your opinion. v.31

some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 31
With the rise in the environmental issues in today's world, many people believe that these issues should be dealt with on a global level while others believe them to be taken care of in individual countries. Although taking care of environmental issues on a global level has many advantages, but the benefits of nationally solving these issues cannot be overlooked. Firstly, Different countries involved in solving environmental issues could bring different ideas and techniques to the table. Every country accelerates in different spheres of science and technology, hence, their capabilities can prove to be very effective in solving major environmental crisis. Furthermore, different countries coming together to solve the environmental issues could bring more financial sustainability in order to troubleshoot these issues. Take, Countries America with the biggest economy, could help building a good financial ground for researching on these issues. On the contrary, Individual countries have more power on their public. Each country could examine their environmental issues and work individually to put actions and methods in place so that people are forced to work against the environmental degradation. Given that each country has more visibility on the internal issues such as water pollution, air pollution, the government could analyse the issues appropriately. Along with that, individual countries could impose these solutions fairly easily than their implementation on a global level. Finally in my view, tackling issues, global and nationally hold equal importance when implied based on the severity and destruction of the issues. Many issues such as global warming impacts the entire planet and requires a lot of financial and scientific grounds to be dealt with whereas issues such as water pollution could be examined and demolished nationally via following some strict rules.
With the rise in the
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environmental
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issues
in
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today
's world,
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many
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people
believe that these
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issues
should
be dealt
with on a
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global
level while others believe them to
be taken
care of in individual
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countries
. Although taking care of
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environmental
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issues
on a
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global
level has
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many
advantages,
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but
the benefits of
nationally
solving these
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issues
cannot
be overlooked
.

Firstly
,
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Different
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countries
involved in solving
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environmental
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issues
could bring
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different
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ideas
and techniques to the table. Every
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country
accelerates in
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different
spheres of science and technology,
hence
, their capabilities can prove to be
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very
effective in solving major
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environmental
crisis.
Furthermore
,
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different
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countries
coming together to solve the
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environmental
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issues
could bring more financial sustainability in order to troubleshoot these
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issues
. Take,
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Countries
America with the biggest economy, could
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help
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building
a
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good
financial ground for researching on these issues.

On the contrary
, Individual
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countries
have more power on their public. Each
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country
could examine their
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environmental
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issues
and work
individually
to put actions and methods in place
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so
that
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people
are forced
to work against the
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environmental
degradation.
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Given
that each
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country
has more visibility on the internal
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issues
such as water pollution, air pollution, the
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government
could
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analyse
the
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issues
appropriately
. Along with that, individual
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countries
could impose these solutions
fairly
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easily
than their implementation on a
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global
level.

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Finally
in my view, tackling
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issues
,
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global
and
nationally
hold equal importance when implied based on the severity and destruction of the
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issues
.
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Many
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issues
such as
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global
warming impacts the entire planet and requires
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a lot of
financial and scientific grounds to
be dealt
with whereas
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issues
such as water pollution could
be examined
and demolished
nationally
via following
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some
strict
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rules
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 31

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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