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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion v.23

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 23
Learning language of other nations is necessary for different purposes of our life while many people think that it is necessitated only for tourism or doing a work abroad, many still believe that not only for these but also another cause is laying for acquiring overseas wording. This essay will discuss why acquiring another vigorous is needed for tourism and profession, but why acquiring vocabulary is necessary for other purposes. Acquiring a new accent is certainly an efficient way of visiting to or getting tasks overseas. A person can easily travel to abroad or get an appointment without facing any hassle if the new dialect is known because nowadays in many workplaces they not only require the work experience but also want to having skills on their own vibrations. As an example, In Japan they use their native dialect rather than English for this everybody should have a minimum proficiency about their words before travelling or applying for a career. Being able to acquiring new style assists a tourist or service holder in a new country. However, a new sound is not only necessary for travellers or profession holders it also helps in globalisation and escalate the learning ability in a broader sense. Learning other languages rather than mother tongue allows one to know about a new culture and rituals of the new society, moreover it opens the door of the world for those who learn a new word. For instance, think about the variety of forms of prose, their use which helps to understand the race of the world. It goes without saying that vocabulary learning if you have wished, become familiar with globalisation and assist to enhance awareness and experience as well. In conclusion, the introduction of overseas expression is being challenged. This essay discussed why new vocabulary can be extremely efficient things for tourists and service holders abroad, but why another flawless can open the door of ability. In my opinion, acquiring a new accent, one can understand the competition amongst the world not only helpful for travellers and working person.
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Learning
language of other nations is necessary for
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different
purposes of our life while
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many
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people
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think
that it
is necessitated
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only
for tourism or doing a work abroad,
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many
still
believe that not
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only
for these
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but
also
another cause is laying for
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acquiring
overseas wording. This essay will discuss why
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acquiring
another vigorous
is needed
for tourism and profession,
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but
why
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acquiring
vocabulary is necessary for other purposes.

Acquiring a
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new
accent is
certainly
an efficient way of visiting to or getting tasks overseas. A person can
easily
travel to abroad or
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get
an appointment without facing any hassle if the
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new
dialect
is known
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because
nowadays in
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many
workplaces they not
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only
require the work experience
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but
also
want to
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having
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skills
on their
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own
vibrations. As an example, In Japan they
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use
their native dialect
rather
than English for this everybody should have a minimum proficiency about their words
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before
travelling or applying for a career. Being able to
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acquiring
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new
style assists a tourist or service holder in a
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new
country.

However
, a
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new
sound is not
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only
necessary for
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travellers
or profession holders it
also
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helps
in
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globalisation
and escalate the
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learning
ability in a broader sense.
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Learning
other languages
rather
than mother tongue
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allows
one to know about a
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new
culture and rituals of the
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new
society,
moreover
it opens the door of the world for those who learn a
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new
word.
For instance
,
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think
about the variety of forms of prose, their
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use
which
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helps
to understand the race of the world. It goes without saying that vocabulary
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learning
if you have wished, become familiar with
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globalisation
and assist to enhance awareness and experience
as well
.

In conclusion
, the introduction of overseas expression is
being challenged
. This essay discussed why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
vocabulary can be
extremely
efficient things for tourists and service holders abroad,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
why another flawless can open the door of ability. In my opinion,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
acquiring
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
accent, one can understand the competition amongst the world not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
helpful for
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travellers
and working person.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 23

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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