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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v.20

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 20
Learning an another foreign tongue is one of the common habit in the 21st century. Some people maintain that an individual learns a new expression only to travel around the world, or to study abroad, while others consider that it is not a unique precursor of studying foreign wording. This essay will attempt to elaborate examine both sides of the arguments and set out my own opinion. By the researcher’s findings plethora of humankind, about 60% survey one of the ubiquitous languages, unfortunately only 40% learns not popular tongues. It is a compelling evidence to the former perspective. It is quite natural that people want to learn a foreign language only to be able to communicate with people who speak this language. Nevertheless, a person needs to learn a tongue in order to visit the developed countries such as the USA, France, Italy, or review there. For this reason plenty of people claim that studying the language is only for the benefits. However, as they say not two are the same, a person may research a terminology to develop yourself, to improve the knowledges. There are plenty of people that intend to expand their skills and abilities. People who know more languages are capable of reading more books, and understanding the lifestyle of different nationalities. For these reasons, it is not straightforward to revue the latter opinions. To summarize, in my opinion, most of people investigate foreign languages for journeys or to studies on the account of the fact that in our busy lifestyle not everybody wants to study only for themselves. Relying on these arguments I entirely argue with the first perspective.
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to travel around the world, or to study abroad, while others consider that it is not a unique precursor of studying
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foreign
wording. This essay will attempt to elaborate examine both sides of the arguments and set out my
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own
opinion.

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languages
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40%
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learns
not popular tongues. It is a compelling evidence to the former perspective. It is quite natural that
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people
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learn
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language
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learn
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developed countries
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languages
are capable of reading more books, and understanding the lifestyle of
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different
nationalities. For these reasons, it is not straightforward to revue the latter opinions.

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IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 20

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
273 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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