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Some people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another? v.4

Internet is growing up everyday and making people connect to each other. Social Media brings far away people to be near their relationship easily. As I am the people who use internet daily, I extremely agree with internet is bringing human-being together by using internet communication. In my opinion, people will be got several communicate’s benefits for use it as their daily routine. First of all, people are getting well relationship from one to one. For example, my mother was got many special me message from my father which he send a lot of heart emojis to my mom. They were lived in different city and known each other by Facebook. Internet made both of my parent be marriage and had me as a daughter of them. In the same way, internet can help people to have new friends from many places. For instance, I got new friends which was from Facebook because I was trying to learn English by speaking with foreigners, so it made me chatting and having some calls with other people that I got in Facebook and I also used messenger to communicate with them. I have been improved a lot of my English skills. In conclusion, internet always helps people in Worldwide to have conversation and also brings all lovers be together. Moreover, it is true that internet makes this whole world to be tiny and bring human-being nearly.

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everyday
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people
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people
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. As I am the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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use
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agree
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communicate’s
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use
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Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
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people
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got
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many
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send
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 heart emojis to my mom. They were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
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different
 city and known each other by Facebook. Internet made both of my parent be marriage and had me as a daughter of them.

In the same way
, internet can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to have new friends from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places. For instance
, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
 new friends which was from Facebook This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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so
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some
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people
 that I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
got
The usual collocation for “Facebook” is “on”. Did you mean “on Facebook”?on Facebook
in Facebook
 and I also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 messenger to communicate with them. I have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 my English This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

In conclusion
, internet always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in Worldwide to have conversation and also
 brings all lovers be together. Moreover
, it is true that internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 this whole world to be tiny and bring human-being nearly
. 