With the advancement of technologies such as smartphones and the Internet, people spend a lot of time on social media. Though some people believe in making friends only after a personal interaction, I strongly support the idea of making friends online since it is not only more convenient but also helps develop friendships with people from diverse backgrounds.
Firstly, social sites are beneficial for many people to make new friends not only in one’s own country but also from abroad. This helps in knowing a foreign culture through conversation with friends. Similarly, it helps a person who has an introvert personality because he does not mix easily with other people when he meets them face to face. For instance, these sites provide chat rooms as well as video call or voice call to avoid face-to-face conversations. He can use only messenger or chat room for conversation with a new friend.
Secondly, nowadays, by making new friends all over the world homemakers are establishing their business worldwide and it helps a lot in becoming financially strong. For example, these online websites provide business pages for spreading business everywhere, which can help not only the businessmen but also in the national economy
In conclusion, making friends on social media is an excellent way to network and gain insights about various cultures and countries. It is a convenient way to resolve international and intercultural conflicts, and create a sustainable society. It is not harmful if we would use some features such as block the person when we feel a threat of some kind.
With the advancement of technologies such as smartphones and the Internet,
people
spend
a lot of
time on social media. Though
some
people
believe in making
friends
only
after a personal interaction, I
strongly
support the
idea
of making
friends
online since it is not
only
more convenient
but
also
helps
develop friendships with
people
from diverse backgrounds.
Firstly
, social sites are beneficial for
many
people
to
make
new
friends
not
only
in one’s
own
country
but
also
from abroad. This
helps
in knowing a foreign culture through conversation with
friends
.
Similarly
, it
helps
a person who has an introvert personality
because
he does not mix
easily
with other
people
when he meets them face to face.
For instance
, these sites provide chat rooms
as well
as video call or voice call to avoid face-to-face conversations. He can
use
only
messenger or chat room for conversation with a new friend.
Secondly
, nowadays, by making new
friends
all over the world homemakers are establishing their business worldwide and it
helps
a lot in becoming
financially
strong.
For example
, these online websites provide business pages for spreading business everywhere, which can
help
not
only
the businessmen
but
also
in the national
economy
In conclusion
, making
friends
on social media is an excellent way to network and gain insights about various cultures and countries. It is a convenient way to resolve international and intercultural conflicts, and create a sustainable society. It is not harmful if we would
use
some
features such as block the person when we feel a threat of
some
kind.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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