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Some people say that people remember special gifts or present that they receive. Why do you think that is? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

Some people say that people remember special gifts or present that they receive. Why do you think that is? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Gifts are gesture of love. Hence, these are always remembered by the people as special presents, is asserted by a part of population. However, it is true to only some extent as masses do not remember all of them, typically a few them due to reasons like affection, love, meaning and gratitude. It is not wrong to assume that people receive tons of presents on quotidian basis from their relatives, friends, loved ones or any other person whenever there is an occasion being celebrated. Although, saying that they remember all these gifts is kind of misleading as even people tend to forget some mementos in the time period of one or two months, sometimes, may be even in less time. Nevertheless, there are always some presents which are recalled by a person every time he/she sees it and always kept close to the heart. Such gifts always come from the person toward whom the receiver is very affectionate and loving. A common example of this can be seen in the love of husband and wife or boy and girl who always accept mementos from each other with a smile on face. Another cause is the special or hidden meaning behind the gift. For instance, a child giving roses to his mother on ' Happy Mother' s Day' or any other occasion, to show love and appreciation, will unfailingly be recalled by the latter person, even in the normal talk about the son or daughter. Beside this, gifts in the form of donation, charity, perks, gratitude also tend to hold special place in person’s life especially if, given in times of need. Having discussed the aforementioned views, it is not wrong for an individual to expect from people to remember mementos given by him/her, even though, it is not always the case as most people give presents to show their feelings, not on the basis that they will always be remembered.
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are gesture of
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love
.
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, these are always remembered by the
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people
as special
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presents
,
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by a part of population.
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extent as masses do not remember all of them,
typically
a few them due to reasons like affection,
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love
, meaning and gratitude.

It is not
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wrong
to assume that
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people
receive tons of
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presents
on quotidian basis from their relatives, friends,
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loved
ones or any other
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person
whenever there is an occasion
being celebrated
. Although, saying that they remember all these
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gifts
is kind of misleading as even
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people
tend to forget
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some
mementos in the time period of one or two months,
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, may be even in less time.

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affectionate and loving. A common example of this can be
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in the
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of husband and wife or boy and girl who always accept mementos from each other with a smile on face. Another cause is the special or hidden meaning behind the
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gift
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love
and appreciation, will
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by the latter
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person
, even in the normal talk about the son or daughter. Beside this,
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gifts
in the form of donation, charity, perks, gratitude
also
tend to hold special place in
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person’s
life
especially
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Having discussed the aforementioned views, it is not
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to remember mementos
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people
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show
their feelings, not on the basis that they will always
be remembered
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that people remember special gifts or present that they receive. Why do you think that is? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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