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Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree? v.8

Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree? v. 8
There is a view that the drawbacks of modern innovations are higher than the benefits. In my opinion, every innovator always tries to invent new products or services to make people’s life easier. In this essay, I will highlight the fundamental reason why I totally disagree with this perspective. To begin with the first reason, nowadays, most of common barriers in our activity have disappeared because of the new invention. For example, a video call feature in our gadget can help people doing virtual meetings without being in the same place. Secondly, some business books have shown related research about the urgency of doing innovation. This is because proposing new value to customers continually will affect positively to business sustainability. To illustrate, if modern changes like Airbnb and Uber do not contribute to the benefits, the hotel and transportation industry will not get decreasing income. However, few modern technologies have been harnessed in a wrong way, so it brought crucial damage. For instance, the United States used Albert Einstein’s invention, which was nuclear, to destroy some cities in other countries. Even though every innovation might have side effects, but it can be minimized by some strategies. For instance, the organization which produces the new product must occupy their innovation with obvious instruction to mitigate the cost of the ignorance. In addition, the regulator can start making a good campaign to increase people’s awareness of using the product wisely. To sum up, the purpose of producing modern innovation is for a better life, and the utilization for a negative purpose can be tackled by some mitigation processes. Thus, the advantage of every innovation is much higher than the disadvantage.
There is a view that the drawbacks of
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modern
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are higher than the benefits. In my opinion, every innovator always tries to invent
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new
products or services to
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make
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people
’s life easier. In this essay, I will highlight the fundamental reason why I
totally
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begin
with the
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reason, nowadays, most of common barriers in our activity have disappeared
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because
of the
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new
invention.
For example
, a video call feature in our gadget can
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help
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people
doing virtual meetings without being in the same place.
Secondly
,
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some
business books have shown related research about the urgency of doing
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innovation
. This is
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because
proposing
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new
value to customers
continually
will affect
positively
to business sustainability. To illustrate, if
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modern
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changes
like Airbnb and Uber do not contribute to the benefits, the hotel and transportation industry will not
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get
decreasing income.

However
, few
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modern
technologies have
been harnessed
in a
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wrong
way,
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so
it brought crucial damage.
For instance
, the United States
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used
Albert Einstein’s invention, which was nuclear, to
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destroy
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some
cities in other countries.
Even though
every
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innovation
might have side effects,
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but
it can
be minimized
by
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some
strategies.
For instance
, the organization which produces the
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new
product
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must
occupy their
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innovation
with obvious instruction to mitigate the cost of the ignorance.
In addition
, the regulator can
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start
making a
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good
campaign to increase
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people
’s awareness of using the product
wisely
.

To sum up, the purpose of producing
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modern
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innovation
is for a better life, and the utilization for a
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negative
purpose can
be tackled
by
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some
mitigation processes.
Thus
, the advantage of every
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innovation
is much higher than the disadvantage.
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IELTS essay Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree? v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
8
Overall Band Score
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