Leisure activities play an important role in our life. This also help in fully growth of children with more preference given to leisure activities. These activities should not related to education at all.
I disagree with the statement, education is not everything in our life. Leisure activities are also required to live our life properly. However, children are on developing stage and they perform nemerous activity to make themselves well in every field of life. It also help in improving brain power, which is necessary for education. So not give preference to education in every field of life. Every types of activities in our life help them to enhancement of the knowledge related to activities they perform. Leisure activities help them in physical development. So it is not consider as wastage of time. Leisure activities help in both physical as well as mental function of children.
Education also play an important role in our life. It make the person smart and also enhance the personality in their society. Education make the man capable for earn money for fulfill their food and basic requirement. In leisure activities they did not spend lot of time on playing computer games and other outdoor activities. They cannot give attention on their study properly. Every child has different talent inside them as well they required the specific time for their talent to come forward. Like, Sachin Tendulkar in their childhood they spend lot of time on playing cricket as well as to learn new skills of this game. Today, all the world know about their hard work and success in the field of cricket.
In the epilogue, every activity has a different advantages and play vital role in children Life. So, every parents listen the interest of their child to help their child according to their child interest.
Leisure
activities
play an
important
role in our
life
. This
also
help
in
fully
growth of children with more preference
given
to
leisure
activities
. These
activities
should not
related
to
education
at all.
I disagree with the statement,
education
is not everything in our
life
.
Leisure
activities
are
also
required to
live
our
life
properly
.
However
, children are on developing
stage and
they perform
nemerous
activity
to
make
themselves
well
in every field of
life
. It
also
help
in improving brain power, which is necessary for
education
.
So
not give preference to
education
in every field of
life
. Every
types
of
activities
in our
life
help
them to enhancement of the knowledge related to
activities
they perform.
Leisure
activities
help
them in physical development.
So
it is not
consider
as wastage of
time
.
Leisure
activities
help
in both physical as
well
as mental function of children.
Education
also
play an
important
role in our
life
. It
make
the person smart and
also
enhance the personality in their society.
Education
make
the
man
capable for earn money for fulfill their food and basic requirement. In
leisure
activities
they did not spend
lot of
time
on playing computer games and other outdoor
activities
. They cannot give attention on their study
properly
. Every
child
has
different
talent inside them as
well
they required the specific
time
for their talent to
come
forward. Like,
Sachin
Tendulkar
in their childhood they spend
lot of
time
on playing cricket as
well
as to learn new
skills
of this game.
Today
, all the world know about their
hard
work and success in the field of cricket.
In the epilogue, every
activity
has a
different
advantages and play vital role in children
Life
.
So
, every
parents
listen the interest of their
child
to
help
their
child
according to their
child
interest.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
49Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes