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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened could be brought closer together. Include any relevant example from your experiencr. v.8

It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened could be brought closer together. Include any relevant example from your experiencr. v. 8
Family play an important role in the life of every person. Without the family, person cannot enjoy our life. Relation between family member impact on life of each member. I agree with the statement, in modern era, life is very difficult and quick. Every person do not have enough time to be spend with their family members. They donot give preference to family member, with that, problem is facing by every family member. One of the major causes of this problem is modern technology, it' s mean every member of family have a smartphone. Therefore they spend ample of time on smartphone instead of take part in family discussion, It is major causes of difficulties in family member. The solution of this problem is not very difficult. Every member give time to family member for discussion problem and share our feeling with each other. In leisure time, member of family spend their more time with our family members. Therefore, It is very necessary to make proper bond between family member as well as when we are in family switch off or silent mode will be turn ON. As well as, spend one holiday with family by goes to picnic on weekend. In our busy life 1-2 hour should be necessary to spend with a family member. Lack of culture responsibility as well as knowledge about our culture is also main problem. In the epilogue, Family is the dedicate indensible and dedicate of every member. Family prevail, therefore human survive. So, every person make proper relation between family member for better life experience.
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Family
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play
an
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important
role in the
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life
of every
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person
. Without the
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family
,
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person
cannot enjoy our
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life
. Relation between
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family
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member
impact on
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life
of each member.

I
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agree
with the statement, in modern era,
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life
is
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very
difficult and quick. Every
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person
do not have
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enough
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time
to be
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spend
with their
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family
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members
. They
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donot
give preference to
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family
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member
, with that,
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problem
is facing by every
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family
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member
. One of the major causes of this
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problem
is modern technology,
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it&
#039; s mean every
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member
of
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family
have a smartphone.
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Therefore
they
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spend
ample of
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time
on smartphone
instead
of
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take part
in
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family
discussion, It is major causes of difficulties in
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family
member.

The solution of this
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problem
is not
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very
difficult. Every
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member
give
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time
to
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family
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member
for discussion
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problem
and share our feeling with each other. In leisure
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time
,
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member
of
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family
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spend
their more
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time
with our
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family
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members
.
Therefore
, It is
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very
necessary to
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make
proper bond between
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family
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member
as well
as when we are in
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family
switch off or silent mode will be
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turn
ON.
As well
as,
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spend
one holiday with
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family
by goes to picnic on weekend. In our busy
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life
1-2 hour should be necessary to
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spend
with a
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family
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member
. Lack of culture responsibility
as well
as knowledge about our culture is
also
main problem.

In the epilogue,
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Family
is
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'dedicate' is correct. If 'dedicate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the dedicate
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indensible
and dedicate of every
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member
.
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Family
prevail,
therefore
human survive.
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So
, every
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person
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make
proper relation between
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family
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member
for better
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life
experience.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
56Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened could be brought closer together. Include any relevant example from your experiencr. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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