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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagee? v.17

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagee? v. 17
Today the mother Earth has shrunken, and became a global village. While, a large part of society thinks, character and culture of a person can be assessed from their dressing style, however, I partially agree with them, as clothes can assist a bit in it, but complete assassination cannot be done. This essay will elaborate various reasons for the same. To begin with, the character is a state of inner mind, which cannot be judged by a look at the attire of a person, so to know about a somebody, one may have to spend time with them rather then judging from the clothes. For example, in a factory there could be a huge difference between the outfits of a worker and the boss, the former may look dirty due to heavy tasks, whereas the latter may appear clean and tidy. Thus, it does not reveal the nature of a that human being. Nevertheless, this could be observed that many people with high socioeconomic status might indulge into illegal acts like: poaching; taking an animal's life for the fun, or even a poor individual may intend to rob someone to survive. Hence, an adult's needs decides their character, not the apparels. Moving further, clothes and tradition have shown a direct relation since past. To clarify, Sikh people don't only wear a turban, but have a long beard as well, People in Punjab dress up wearing "Salwar Kameez" for women and Kurta pajama" for men, but today this relation has vanished. For instance, many Sikh youngsters do not have long hair with a turban, Muslim girls do not wear burkhaas. Moreover, they want to remain casual and updated in terms of fashion rather then following the old customs only. In conclusion, I believe attire could be reliable to know the religion to some extent, but both of these cannot be completely assumed from their dressing style as it always changes with time, place, and comfort of a person.
Today
the mother Earth has shrunken, and became a global village. While, a large part of society
thinks
, character and culture of a person can
be assessed
from their dressing style,
however
, I
partially
agree
with them, as clothes can assist a bit in it,
but
complete assassination cannot
be done
. This essay will elaborate various reasons for the same.

To
begin
with, the character is a state of inner mind, which cannot
be judged
by a look at the attire of a person,
so
to know about a somebody, one may
have to
spend time with them
rather
then
judging from the clothes.
For example
, in a factory there could be a huge difference between the outfits of a worker and the boss, the former may look dirty due to heavy tasks, whereas the latter may appear clean and tidy.
Thus
, it does not reveal the nature of a that human being.
Nevertheless
, this could
be observed
that
many
people
with high socioeconomic status might indulge into illegal acts like: poaching; taking an animal's life for the fun, or even a poor individual may intend to rob someone to survive.
Hence
, an adult's needs decides their character, not the apparels.

Moving
further
, clothes and tradition have shown a direct relation since past. To clarify, Sikh
people
don't
only
wear a turban,
but
have a long beard
as well
,
People
in Punjab dress up wearing
"
Salwar
Kameez
"
for women and
Kurta
pajama
"
for
men
,
but
today
this relation has vanished.
For instance
,
many
Sikh youngsters do not have long hair with a turban, Muslim girls do not wear
burkhaas
.
Moreover
, they want to remain casual and updated in terms of fashion
rather
then
following the
old
customs
only
.

In conclusion
, I believe attire could be reliable to know the religion to
some
extent,
but
both of these cannot be completely assumed from their dressing style as it always
changes
with time, place, and comfort of a person.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagee? v. 17

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
7.5
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