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somsome people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. do you agree or dis agree? v.1

somsome people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. do you agree or dis agree? v. 1
It's not an easy to predict about a personality from its outward appearance, culture and characteristics, but a few people argue it is possible to guess from a person's culture, character and wearing dresses. In my opinion, I disagree with that because it shouldn’t make any perception until have full detailed information. Firstly, globalization is playing a vital role to bring a mix culture. Economy destabilized of poor countries pushed to take step towards moving to progressive countries. Most of the 3rd world countries culture represents their economic situation when someone moved to advanced countries from their clothes. For example, there are less opportunities for jobs, it's possible to guess someone from choice of clothing or culture. However, may one not be able to predict their character and values. A person always wearing religious dress or traditional costumes may reveal their devotional and spiritual nature. A usually decent and formally wear person portrays simplicity and modesty. Multi colored and flashy dresses indicates the living style of a person or thoughts exuberant. For instance, entertainers, and celebrities are often seen in jazzy dresses. Also, an odd-coloured, loosely-fitted and shabby clothing may be indicating their careless attitude. Nevertheless, I feel that outward clothing is a righteous choice to decide whether it may disguise a person's inner self. For example, some imposters donning sacred robes of fraudulent and pretends as a religious symbol. Moreover, a person's choice of clothing cannot be used as a reflection of his characteristics. In general, you have some kind of authentic prove about it or interaction to get the full detailed information. A woman is wearing light colour and short clothes for her comfort may incorrectly be perceived as indecent in some countries. To conclude that, it is very difficult to predict about a person's culture and character and wearing of clothes. However, it has to be a clear information to indicate the full character or interaction to say about it.
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culture
and characteristics,
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but
a few
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people
argue it is possible to guess from a
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person's
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culture
,
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character
and wearing
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dresses
. In my opinion, I disagree with that
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because
it shouldn’t
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make
any perception until have full detailed information.

Firstly
, globalization is playing a vital role to bring a mix
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culture
. Economy destabilized of poor
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countries
pushed to take step towards moving to progressive
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countries
. Most of the 3rd world
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countries
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culture
represents their economic situation when someone
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moved
to advanced
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countries
from their clothes.
For example
, there are
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less
opportunities for jobs, it's possible to guess someone from choice of clothing or
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culture
.
However
, may one not be able to predict their
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character
and values. A person always wearing religious
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dress
or traditional costumes may reveal their devotional and spiritual nature. A
usually
decent and
formally
wear person portrays simplicity and modesty. Multi colored and flashy
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dresses
indicates the living style of a person or thoughts exuberant.
For instance
, entertainers, and celebrities are
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often
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seen
in jazzy
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dresses
.
Also
, an
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odd-coloured
,
loosely
-fitted and shabby clothing may be indicating their careless attitude.

Nevertheless
, I feel that outward clothing is a righteous choice to decide whether it may disguise a
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person's
inner self.
For example
,
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some
imposters donning sacred robes of fraudulent and pretends as a religious symbol.
Moreover
, a
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person's
choice of clothing cannot be
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used
as a reflection of his characteristics.
In general
, you have
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some
kind of authentic
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prove
about it or interaction to
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get
the full detailed information. A woman is wearing light
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colour
and short clothes for her comfort may
incorrectly
be perceived
as indecent in
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some
countries.

To conclude
that, it is
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very
difficult to predict about a
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person's
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culture
and
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character
and wearing of clothes.
However
, it
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has to
be a
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clear
information to indicate the full
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character
or interaction to say about it.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay somsome people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. do you agree or dis agree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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