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Some people say that in the modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people say that in the modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. v. 2
In today’s era, writing in hand is considered to be increasingly less significant to be taught with the popularity of typing. convenient as typing is, I think handwriting should be educated in children, well protected and inherited. typing, as a newly emerging means of recording information, shows its strong vigor for its tremendous convenience in education. The biggest advantage is that typing leads to a rapid speed in recording information like notes compared to traditional handwriting while it is in an urgency that words or sentences must be fast recorded or something crucial would be missed especially in class or lecture. Meanwhile, information typed is also convenient to conserve or upload to the internet compared to paper which is easy to lose. But handwriting has its own contribution to children especially in developing their study skills. In the process of children studying handwriting, they also improve their literal skills. while using traditional handwriting, they will strengthen their skills in memorizing educational materials. that is because when taking notes in hand, they will easily remember the content with writing again and again. Additionally, it promotes a better skill in writing with lots of practice. Another benefit is that students studying handwriting which represents the unique culture of its country, will strengthen their sense of belonging to their motherland and it will be protected and inherited better in return. Language generally plays a vital role in a country’s culture, in other words, shoulders the mission of preserving ethical memorial and handwriting is one of a most primary method to conserve and inherit it. when children are taught with this method, they will understand the words meaning, its origin, development and evolution process better. Thus, grasping these, they will find their sense of belonging to their country, unique and great culture. it will bring about better preservation and inheritance and even enrich the culture by putting into novel elements. In conclusion, though traditional recording information means, handwriting undergoes strong hit by modern methods like typing using keyboards, it still has an irreplaceable role for children’s study and cultural protection.
In
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today
’s era, writing in hand
is considered
to be
increasingly
less significant to
be taught
with the popularity of typing.
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convenient
as typing is, I
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think
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handwriting
should
be educated
in
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children
, well protected and inherited.

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typing
, as a
newly
emerging means of recording
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information
,
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shows
its strong vigor for its tremendous convenience in education. The biggest advantage is that typing leads to a rapid speed in recording
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information
like notes compared to traditional
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handwriting
while it is in an urgency that words or sentences
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must
be
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fast
recorded or something crucial would
be missed
especially
in
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class
or lecture. Meanwhile,
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information
typed is
also
convenient to conserve or upload to the internet compared to paper which is easy to lose.

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But
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handwriting
has its
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own
contribution to
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children
especially
in developing their study
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skills
. In the process of
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children
studying
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handwriting
, they
also
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improve
their literal
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skills
.
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while
using traditional
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handwriting
, they will strengthen their
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skills
in memorizing educational materials.
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that
is
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because
when taking notes in hand, they will
easily
remember the content with writing again and again.
Additionally
, it promotes a
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better
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skill
in writing with lots of practice.

Another benefit is that students studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handwriting
which represents the unique
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
of its country, will strengthen their sense of belonging to their motherland and it will
be protected
and inherited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
in return. Language
generally
plays a vital role in a country’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
,
in other words
, shoulders the mission of preserving ethical memorial and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handwriting
is one of a most primary method to conserve and inherit it. when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
are taught
with this method, they will understand the words meaning, its origin, development and evolution process
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
.
Thus
, grasping these, they will find their sense of belonging to their country, unique and great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
.
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it
will bring about
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better
preservation and inheritance and even enrich the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
by putting into novel elements.

In conclusion
, though traditional recording
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
means,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handwriting
undergoes strong hit by modern methods like typing using keyboards, it
still
has an irreplaceable role for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children’s
study and cultural protection.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that in the modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
346 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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