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Some people say it is an age where it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. Others say believe that handwriting I still important. To what extent would you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people say it is an age where it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. Others say believe that handwriting I still important. v. 1
The introduction and rapid rise of computers and products such as smart-phones appears to have reduced the need to write anything by hand to near zero. This situation has given momentum to a heated debate about whether to teach children the skill of handwriting or if such a craft is now redundant. I wish to proceed to discuss each opinion. Some people claim that it is unnecessary to teach children how to write by hand, because we rarely write something on paper. Instead, digital devices have replaced traditional ways in which people provide information. Let us look at examples, artificial intelligence makes it possible to use our voices and facial recognition with no need to type anything. Given these advances it appears to many that writing by hand should be considered archaic and no longer required. Conversely, other people still strongly feel and advocate that the skill of handwriting is not only beneficial to children’s academic performance, but also helpful to their development of personality. For example, learning calligraphy may well help a teenager be a patient person, while easing their pressures which emanate from modern day living. Furthermore, there is the need for a practical understanding of reading, and understanding how each letter is formed and its phonic meaning, and handwriting is the basic tool used to understand this important aspect of language. In conclusion, I agree that people are more likely to text messages through their digital device. It seems we do not rely on handwriting anything more. Yet, as those who fairly cite, it can facilitate fostering a better understanding of the language we speak and read. Besides, handwriting is a very human skill that must be passed down to future generations. Therefore, my view is to make a balance between technological applications and natural skills.
The introduction and rapid rise of computers and products such as smart-phones appears to have
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reduced
the need to write anything by hand to near zero. This situation has
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given
momentum to a heated debate about whether to teach children the
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skill
of
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handwriting
or if such a craft is
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now
redundant. I wish to proceed to discuss each opinion.

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Some
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people
claim that it is unnecessary to teach children how to write by hand,
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because
we rarely write something on paper.
Instead
, digital devices have replaced traditional ways in which
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people
provide information.
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Let
us look at examples, artificial intelligence
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makes
it possible to
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use
our voices and facial recognition with no need to type anything.
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Given
these advances it appears to
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many
that writing by hand should
be considered
archaic and no longer required.

Conversely
, other
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people
still
strongly
feel and advocate that the
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skill
of
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handwriting
is not
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only
beneficial to children’s academic performance,
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but
also
helpful to their development of personality.
For example
, learning calligraphy may well
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help
a
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teenager
be a patient person, while easing their pressures which emanate from modern day living.
Furthermore
, there is the need for a practical understanding of reading, and understanding how each letter
is formed
and its phonic meaning, and
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handwriting
is the basic tool
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used
to understand this
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important
aspect of language.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that
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people
are more likely to text messages through their digital device. It seems we do not rely on
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handwriting
anything more.
Yet
, as those who
fairly
cite, it can facilitate fostering a better understanding of the language we speak and read.
Besides
,
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handwriting
is a
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very
human
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skill
that
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must
be passed
down to future generations.
Therefore
, my view is to
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make
a balance between technological applications and natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people say it is an age where it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. Others say believe that handwriting I still important. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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