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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? v.8

It has been an ongoing debate on the design of the curriculum of the school. Some people perceive that whether in most of the elementary school to the colleges which are giving focus on the theoretical knowledge, not enough on the practical skills. I strongly agree with this view, which having more theoretical exams. The essay will discuss above notion with arguments in the below paragraphs. To begin with, the predominate reason for the educational institute mostly using the traditional methods. This technique can provide detailed knowledge of any theory. However, in the past, there were less availability of technical instruments. As a result, they give a priority on the theoretical information. Nowadays, most of the institute was following the same trend. Moreover, many academic institutes containing only a few resources, compare to the number of students. This will provide less time in which they utilize it and learn the crucial concepts from that. For example, in most of the secondary school focus on the theoretical subjects such as history, no one will prove the science concept by performing it in the laboratory. Furthermore, to change the entire study culture of the school will demand the more money. That’s the way this company will continue to study only the basic skills and never think about the performing it. Consequently, the students check their curriculum where importance was given to the theory not practical. So, their mind also works based on that and do the preparation of exam base on that. For instance, Research conducted shows that in the recent times many pupils fail in the Interview is due to their theoretical knowledge as they never try to apply their concepts practically. In conclusion, the reason behind to give focus on facts is that they were using the conventional method. Even to start to use that concept in the laboratory demands a large fund to buy the raw materials.
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with, the predominate reason for the educational institute
mostly
using the traditional methods. This technique can provide detailed knowledge of any theory.
However
, in the past, there were less availability of technical instruments.
As a result
, they give a priority on the
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theoretical
information. Nowadays, most of the institute was following the same trend.
Moreover
,
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many
academic institutes containing
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only
a few resources, compare to the number of students. This will provide less time in which they utilize it and learn the crucial
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concepts
from that.
For example
, in most of the secondary
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school
focus on the
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theoretical
subjects such as history, no one will prove the science
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concept
by performing it in the laboratory.

Furthermore
, to
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change
the entire study culture of the
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school
will demand the more money. That’s the way this
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company
will continue to study
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only
the basic
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to the theory not practical.
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, Research conducted
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shows
that in the recent times
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many
pupils fail in the Interview is due to their
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theoretical
knowledge as they never try to apply their
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concepts
practically
.

In conclusion
, the reason behind to give focus on facts is that they were using the conventional method. Even to
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in the laboratory demands a large fund to
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buy
the raw materials.
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IELTS essay Some People say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

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4 paragraphs
318 words
6.5
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